Uppin damn it.. drop links
we'll both hit them up
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Uppin damn it.. drop links
we'll both hit them up
Like bad roadside rescue I "leave u broken"
Got u callin me mase the way my flow "leaves u chokin"
what the fuck, man hell no, hella whack
U might win this batt got kids on ya dik like "fungal infections"
But ur shots don't come off like junkies "who have trouble injectin"
umm hell no again, all filler wheres the personal or punch?
Ur fake an all talk like "lies from politicians"
Like bomb threats at the olympics this "guy's 'no competition"
man just stop, and again hell no, all filler no punch
U like unearthed microchips the way I "damage ya wit static"
U aint a rapper u an actor witcha "amature dramatics"
no and no again, all filler, you suck
Act "hard then get owned" u get touched like "cards sent from home"
ILLunatic wouldn't 'rock' crowds if he "carved them from stone"
yur best bar u said his name but it wasnt directed good at all
man this was whack as fuck theres no reason you should be swaying
you lost so just say close this and give ILLunatic the win seriously
your verse was intirely filler u said his name once but it didnt help
you just rhymed words at the end you had no multis and yur wordplay
sucked everything about this verse was whack man please elavate
For having a 9-1 battle record, you suck. And ya better note this
If ya spittin wack lines.......
............such as you did against So Sik, you'll never get noticed
ok personal, i see two in here, overall ok bar, multis
Look, you set it up, didn't bother to check in, nor wait for me to
Claimin you a vet...
...................kid your not equivalant to spit, like us true vets do
mostly filler, kinda personal but weak
Shit, you mind as well quit. Cuz at rapbattles.com you will never fit
Nor will you be legit....
..I mean come on, you should proof read your verses before clicking submit
ok punch at the end, mostly filler, kinda long bar, attempted multi
Damn, this battle is so unlevel'd. Meaning its easily one sided
What the fuck am I talkin about?...
.....just seeing ILLunatic in the title, tells which the winner is decided
kinda witty, but mostly all filler, overall weak bar
Askin me if you can get in elite..plz, did you honestly need a reply
In elite, talent must be apply'd.....
..and intermentals you have none.. cuz your the weakest link, good-bye
ok personal ok punchline, overall ok closer
aight man ILLunatic won, why? cuz he had actually punchlines and personals
attempted multis and was witty at one point, had better flow and overall was
more creative he just gave more eventhough some shit was weak aight. . . .
like to see more of everything from intermentals and some metaphors from,
ILLunatic but overall one sided ILLunatic didnt have to try so thats it.
vote/ILLunatic, and vote on my battles man and unbann my It alias would ya
its been 2 weeks hasnt it, fuck i cant remember it seems to me that its been 4 weeks
lol............................................... ................................................
damn i need 150 posts, lmao my bad ILLunatic :rolleyes:
Upping
Instru-
Like bad roadside rescue I "leave u broken"
Got u callin me mase the way my flow "leaves u chokin"
ok attempt but mase stings ur eyes, not chokes u
U might win this batt got kids on ya dik like "fungal infections"
But ur shots don't come off like junkies "who have trouble injectin"
1st line was going somewhere... 2nd fucked it
Ur fake an all talk like "lies from politicians"
Like bomb threats at the olympics this "guy's 'no competition"
again 1st line was going somewhere... 2nd fucked it
U like unearthed microchips the way I "damage ya wit static"
U aint a rapper u an actor witcha "amature dramatics"
lol good punch finally
Act "hard then get owned" u get touched like "cards sent from home"
ILLunatic wouldn't 'rock' crowds if he "carved them from stone"
pretty good closure not bad verse, structure gotta a little messed up at end but your punches got better towards the end 4/10
Ill-
For having a 9-1 battle record, you suck. And ya better note this
If ya spittin wack lines.......
............such as you did against So Sik, you'll never get noticed
ok opener, played personal
Look, you set it up, didn't bother to check in, nor wait for me to
Claimin you a vet...
...................kid your not equivalant to spit, like us true vets do
mehhh na, weak
Shit, you mind as well quit. Cuz at rapbattles.com you will never fit
Nor will you be legit....
..I mean come on, you should proof read your verses before clicking submit
lol liked it
Damn, this battle is so unlevel'd. Meaning its easily one sided
What the fuck am I talkin about?...
.....just seeing ILLunatic in the title, tells which the winner is decided
ok
Askin me if you can get in elite..plz, did you honestly need a reply
In elite, talent must be apply'd.....
..and intermentals you have none.. cuz your the weakest link, good-bye
nice closure was the knock out punch, structure was nice and rhyme was good also, nothing really that wrong, good verse 6/10
structure- ILL
rhyme - same Ill a lil better but not enough to give him this sec
personals - same
metas - Ill
punches - Ill
vote - Ill
honest vote re-pay the favor and drop an honest vote on my battles
links in sig!
Finally.. another vote
Upp
Vote- Ill (i'm not dickriding, he just beat u inter)
Intermentals- Some good punches, ok personals. I think they could've been worded a lot better, wordplay was simple at best. They would've been good, and you probably would've got my vote if you had better wordplay. Decent structure, and ok flow. Lose the "s
Illunatic-Decent punches, hit kinda hard. Some good personals, i liked the "cuz at rapbattles.com u'll never fit" line, that was good. Good structure, easy to read, also good wordplay. I think inter had the potential to beat you, if he had a more complex verse.
No, im not dickriding
Return the favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=127255
Well this was pretty one sided....
Inter - obviously a newb, you need to work not only on your punches, but understanding the concept of a battle.... it's not simply to rhyme while saying derogatory comments (i.e. you suck, you're mama I fuck, you better duck) but actually applying a sense of wit about it, use unexpected approaches and hit with a hard personal... hard to really explain in a paragraph... go read the LLL battles or LLL Jr., it will help you elevate
Ill - easy win, didn't drop as good as you should have, but enough to take this since he really had no personals/punches, ect. I'd liek to see more of a display of skill from you, but you did take this one.
Vote - Illunatic.
Can you guys return the favor and drop an honest vote:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=125679