intermentals vs So SiK

I feel the same way Orfentik does---------So sik u are battlin people that are way beyond ur flow--------I didn't know u was only 14 i wouldnt have even battled u. But keep it up battlin hard mc's will only make u betta---- being straight up and to the point with u/ ur punch lines need work

SO SIK:

"my verse has left you runnin like Osma Bin Laden
but my verse flows in the air and crushes your insides n left you diein" WEAK

My Ni99a u could have reworded that sh*t and made it Hot
Jus sit down and think of wat u wanna say---dont jus say shit to say it(Understand) YoungCapo
So Sik
"wasnt the best but hey" DONT DOWN URSELF----JUST SPIT MY NI99A be confident

intermentals: Ur flow was aight too Money

"Shit man u so wak if I ate u wit chilli juice
That'd be the hottest shit you'd ever produce" from 1-10 i give u a 6 on that bar

u could have made some of ur punches stronger 2, but u ended the battle on a good note

My Overall opinion: intermentals won this shit
He was more confident in his flow than So sik

YC thanx 4 the honest vote but check our shit out........

Punches- so sikk
Similies- intermentals
Multies- so sick


vote- so sikk

Yoo Explain Ur Shit Mannnnnnnnnnn

Im Tryin To Give U Honest Opinion Mothafucka---------fuck U Mean Check Out Ur Shit-----------i Could Say U Fucking Suck--------but That Aint Me-------u Should Take My Advice Then Maybe U Will Start Winning Some Battles
Lol-----clown Ass Nigga

yea nigga i sed check our shit out i wuz gettin votes till bullshit came up

uppin leave links........................................

intermentals..

your flow was choppy.. and punches were Kinda Corny..
No hate.. thats juss my opinon.. Multies were Ok.. Punches
didnt connect in the End.. YOUR (fINISHERS)..

I'm creatin' protege-kids when I post like a modern-day-BIG
Like coke addicts there's been dodgy lines you've-got-away-with


^^That was your best Line.. Good Flow.. Punch Is Funny..
Plus I dont think iv'e heard this Before..

personals_4
Punches_6
multies_5
flow_6

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So Sik..

your verse had Better flow.. (ryme scheme).. Vocab could
have used a little work, but some of your punches made up
for them..

ayo dawg punches from me will leave you blind sightless
have every1 in the world cryin for you like the WTC crisis

^^that was your best Overall line in my opinion..


personals_5
Punches_6
multies_6
flow_7


POLL VOTE_ So Sik

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Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Ambiguous

hey this is sabotage I rated your battle under my account " Agility " as part of my agreement with Ailse Phive to unbann sabotage. I am here now to explain this to you and to
poll vote on the battles i previously analysed.

This battle was aight, but...

intermentals: I enjoyed ur verse for the most part, even though it was weak. U had no personals, but good punches and decent metas. Good flow, structure was a little off. Keep elevatin'.

So SiK: Ur verse was not good. You had no personals, played punches, and played metas like the WTC. Work on originality and punches. Keep elevatin'.

Vote: intermentals

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uppin leave some links an I'll hit em up

Intermentals-overall u had a really good verse, i think that u had some real good structure build up, and u had some reall nice punches in there, i agree with the others and i also liked your creativity, i think that you just need to elevate a LITTLE more then you will be REAL GOOD.

So Sik- hey man i think that you did good in this battle, but let me tell you what happened, you started off really good, man but then about halfway through u started slipping off, and not landing any punches, u did have some good ones in there though

V-intermentals

ok

so sik - not a bad verse from you, some ok punches, alot better than other verses ive seen you do, you do need to work on your personals tho, i didnt see any good personals that hurt ya opponent, just elevate and keep battling.


inter - a pretty good verse, you had 2 bars that were decent, great creativity and imagination and very original, you had alot of good punches and i think ya had some good personals. flow was pretty good and structure was ight, but some lines were strecthed, but good verse

vote inter

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