wehat agreat collab, great story told, that was really impressive
sad too, i can tell a lot of emotion went into both verses,
it was a good twist i guess also, the flow was good too,
overall good collab, you two should do another, keep it up
peace
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wehat agreat collab, great story told, that was really impressive
sad too, i can tell a lot of emotion went into both verses,
it was a good twist i guess also, the flow was good too,
overall good collab, you two should do another, keep it up
peace
Eh.. its being put into concideration
Ill-Formula...-Dope collab...Period
Ill-nice verse good imagery in fact and wow!
Ill took the story telling apparoach...I never see him
do that!LoL good job my man...(lets collab some time)
Formula_ I've seen alot of dope drops form you thi month
your collab wit SMZ...good jon imagery was good it all flowed
hell why explain...Dopeizzle Period...
I also think News boradcast shoulda been a verse
^ My man can`t spell, loll.. it`s ok, thanks for the feed.. glad ya`ll like this.. there MIGHT be a Part II.. we`ll see.
Up.. leave links.
^sup with all the name changes?
^ It`s Formula is the Username at my pops house.. this one, I use here.. dunno why, just do.
*shakes head*
Stick to one name
Yo this was crazy man i loved this peace it got better and better as i kept reading this was awsome keep workin i really wana read more of your work peace!
Damn.. this thing is old.
the first like four lines were pretty dope after that formula's verse lacked the overall flow to keep me interested but it was ehh, pretty interesting, lol. as i kept on reading lunatics verse was pretty ill, the beginning was pretty clean, nothing to eye catching but it was still a nice read. cool story, flow could have been a little cleaner on formula's part, but it was coo.. .