BATTLE: kapitolins vs sdizzle

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Originally Posted by sdizzle

ur miles from a rap career, quit now and join rock
closed the door on his future....
...... now hes stuck tryin to knock

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that was pretty nice for an opener
Not dope.. but it was decent
You had some consistant punches
some were weak, others were decent hitting

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Originally Posted by sdizzle

u have no skills, ima keep this real, so heres the deal
u rhymes wouldn't be tight if....
................ if they were air-tight sealed

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That was one of your weak bars.. ok punch tho

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Originally Posted by kapitolins

I'm essential in here thats why Miles_Tone is my full name
think you're fly?Man you're as flat as an imaginary air_plain

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That was pretty weak punch
Most of your lines were fillers
nothing was really catchy in your verse
you were consistant with played punches such as that

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Originally Posted by kapitolins

I'm a star to this, elevatin an art you just can't master
with me all you're doing is ruin you record and diss_asters

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Prolly your best bar
but of course it was a filler
started off good, and ended weakly

v/sdizzle for being consistant with few punches

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Two to one...and three up for votes on sdizzle vs kapitolins...
thanxxxxx

uppin this for the fourth time...people can we get some votes in here?
thanks in advance!!

had lost track of this one...up three
drop a link if you please
thanks

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kap this was a while ago, just upping

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Originally Posted by sdizzle

your verse was ok wasnt really feelin it your structure
^ that would be becuase its not a newb structure its way beyond newb structure

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No, incorrect... that is THE newb structure.. take it from me, ive seen all the fad styles

And this one was formulated for the 1-2 punch tourney..and Cam, so if u like bein a steez jack and a cock jock, keep usin that style..

it sucks, its not rap, its originally a poetry structure from yestery year

but no, you fucking herbs got hold of it, now its just a newbie structure,

LOL@you sayin its beyond newbie when your not even beyond newbie
















as for the battle, s dizzle won for punches and flow, this other kat uh.... Kapotilian, just need to elevate brother, keep battling youll be better

MODs, take it or leave it, thats my vote, if you want help done to FL, quit sendin me those gay ass unexplained, im like the only member who votes just to vote, fuck explaining,

uuping

Damn! Pretty good battle people! Ima have 2 break it down.

SDizzle

ur miles from a rap career, quit now and join rock
closed the door on his future....
...... now hes stuck tryin to knock

^ Good Opener amigo! Pretty damn creative!

ur wack, but did u really need me to say ur borin?
told him hes not wanted here...
....................... so he posts in my crews forum

^ Good Personal, I dunno if its true... little vauge

dropping wack verses asking us if he needs elevation
well duh....
......... like asking if orage juice needs concentration

^ LOL Thats pretty original and creative. good stuff!

completely insane, naw turns out that hes just out his mind
hes just dressing criss-cross......
................. no wonder his styles years behind

^ pretty good .. lol hes behind his time... creative

u coming expecting a win? how when u come with those rhymes
only way u getting wins on this board..
............... if they make a forum before front lines

^ I have no idea what you mean.... creative i guess

u have no skills, ima keep this real, so heres the deal
u rhymes wouldn't be tight if....
................ if they were air-tight sealed

^ Had i not heard a similar line like this before it wouldah been tight. since i have its played

ur raps plain, i mean its the same borin shit ever day
only time u ever time u spit fire it get put out by the rain

^ kinda played... good tho

so quit posting in shock value, ur not getting us excited
know why ur not in are crew..... cuz ur ass wasn't invited

^ Dirty personal & a nice closer!

Good job SdiZzle


Now 4 Kapitolins

Ok SHOCK Value is hot but I sure hope this cat S can dizz ill
electricity can burn anything...he can't even shift chills

^ Wtf? I got no idea.... so imo weak opener

I'm essential in here thats why Miles_Tone is my full name
think you're fly?Man you're as flat as an imaginary air_plain

^ So why is miles tone your full name? lol. and how are imaginary airplanes flat?

I'm a star to this, elevatin an art you just can't master
with me all you're doing is ruin you record and diss_asters

^ meh its ok... kinda played

my rhyme goes On_and_on in its process to sistematically smack you
hits you once,turns and comes back for more...I call it bad_U

^ Pretty good...

not even a horse shoe can help you for I strike strongly
I eat fake computer gangsters like you, ya hear mister Don_Key?

^ lol this was my favourite line... good creativity & wordplay

these verses are like a loaded Rod so you chickened out
now we all see rap to you is a stew_art...ain't no lifting doubts

^ No idea

he won't be around that much with his average word casting
better tattoo you verses' verbs on your skull 'cause when I'm done they'll be you last_ing

^ Decent closer... not too hard hitting tho


All in All I would have to say S Dizzle had a better verse out of creativity flow and personals!

Vote SDizzle

Ok im gonan give this won to dizzle. He came good and his verse was consistent. I felt he came harder. nothing really stood out from either verses but kapo was played in alot of concepts. Flow was about even and structure went to dizzle since kapo lines were stretched. Punches and personals were good from both , but sdizzle edged it.
Both had ok verses, but sdizzle gets my vote.

hit up the battles in my sig please

i want my god damn fucking win

I thought that the battle was hot you guys really showed what Shock Value had to offer. Eventhough some of the lines were wack and playerd out...j/k. Overall the battle was cool and we all need to elevate!

this battle is really old.... but i still want my god damn win.... so all i need is one more vote

ehh...dizz ill came arrite... the othe rkid came a little more direct... neither had great wordplay imagery or ne thing... this was basically a toss up... s dizz ill lost it by just a bit cuz the other kids punches were aimed better. although that _ thing was gay ... whatever it was supposed to mean. i dont read puzzles i read battles..

Both of yall came real hard, it was a good battle. You both had good punchlines and good flow, however Sdizzle structure was a lil better and more consistant so in the end I gotta give it to the dizzle. ~ScreamAtMeEarly~ :gfy:

V/Sdizzle