First OM "War against Myself"

feelin the flow w/ the multis...impressed for first OM....very personal...

i was really feeling that ish.
it's good to see something really deep on here once and a while.
i like the thought, you can jus feel the reminescence.
10/10

oh yeah, was feeling the advanced vocabulary too.

nice peice, i agree, the topic has been done (as with a lot of topics on here, such as mine,) but still the emotion was really good, i can feel your heart on the page,
only thing i can say is that it's in reference of the punchlines,
where are they?

that's it for my part. maybe i'll respond with a little more, but I like this peice yo.

Lol, yeah man.. thanks for the comments, never really thought of applying punches into this type of drop.. ??... I dunno.. thanks anyway
Drop some links and I'll reply soon.. Would like some input from vets if thats possible, but content with the newer cats replyin too. thanks again.

^^ uppin for a lil more feedback..