Ace vs Illitical

Thanx Smiley.Your a true battler and I noticed that you know what your talking about...Nice vote for the rest of yall.Thanx again smiley he lines came played....Also If you click on his name and find his name addresses and stuff...Hes obsessed with aces..Look.Aces of spades and aces of something else is is AIm names and stuff...OMG this kidd Is really obsessed with that stuff..LOL

stop trying to sway votes cuz you know you loss. played my ass. unless their is another you then those lines aren't played retard.

peace

ace-you had a better verse...............better structure...............flow was on.............your punches hit hard but you could have re worded them a bit more so they hit harder...............personals was okay other then the rewording this shit was good.....aswell as the vocab

Illitical-not a bad verse but not good either............your shit was jus okay.........punches was okay deffintly could have spent more time and made them harder............personals could have been more researced for real personals.........structure a lil messed and flow a lil choppy but you had sum vocab......
ELEVATE man

V/ace

Vote gone... This was Flash's alias. Cheating bastard tried to double vote.
-Axe

thats why your obsessed with aces of aces.....Thats all I see on you aim names and stuff.....

v/ace

He was harder hittin than his opponent and the punchlines was good too. Illitical i feel that ur personals was weak and not entertaining, but Ace had a good start, middle & finish! :spit:

vote- ace

.Illitical.-you came weak, very weak. Your structure was all over and u had no flow. A lot of your verses i didnt understand, and some could have been worded much better.
That Oscar the grouch thing was wack and made no sense. Elevate

Ace- You came pretty good. You had a simple but good and easy to read structure. You simply had better personals and harder punches. Your opener and closer were good and you easily knocked this kid.

.Illitical. - Your verse was very weak. Your structure was wack. You had good punches but some of them didn't make sense at all. You also should work on your personals. And that line about the Ace still on a baby stage was wack. Your best line was this: "Everyone aces masterbates, he wants sex so much he has to commit slaughter..
Your Flows is weak,imma give ya some boxing gloves so ya punches can hit harder"

Ace - Your verse was better, much better. Your punchlines were really good - they were the best thing about your verse. Your structure was good. And you had better personals. Favorite line: "Your on full throttle and yet you’re about as fast as me walking
I’m still shocked about the fact that your gayass can be talking"

I forgot to add this lol:

Vote - Ace of Aces...

ILLITICAL = Super Flows (that was for the mods) :)

Ace wins this clearly. Super flows..errr...illitical had no real personals or punches, all were played or forced or shit. You need to work on your approach and basically your whole verse and concept man. Be creative without being wack..it helps. Read other vet battles, visit LLL or LLL Jr.. something..

Ace, you know you won this, even though you didnt come hard..Overall better everything, flow was right on point, which is always important. I saw some creativity and wittiness that you usually bring..it wasnt a bad verse for not coming too hard.

Vote - Ace..