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I read the verse..obviously since I broke it down..the point was..that is was ineffective..and it would of made better since-if-his-entire-verse-consisted-of-this...but it was only for wordplay..so "everyline" was not like that..thats why I said "either way..blagh punch" If you still fail to understand the way I voted. Read your verse and his over again. So I repeat..straight battle.
thanks for the votes..........1-2 thanks to 1 crew vote but fuck it woot im still alive
KO-
Brass knuckles Per-mitt, still couldnt Drive a hard punch bitch,
State ID card say'n ur dope, ... haven't seen a worst Lie-since;
Dope wordplay. Punch kinda lacking ...
Aint takin chances with this battle, like throw'n Dice,
Merk Judge Per-roll, leave him Slippin tryna Surf-ice;
Again, nice wordplay..didnt hit hard though..
'Soon as name ^ punches are played out you'll probly be elite,
But no one Defends ur Honor... so I continue slash'n At-ur-knees;
Decent...I'm seein consistent nice wordplay..
Until Fusion too is here, for an Instant then falls off,
See I own each one of ur Cliques, ... ha jus like Microsoft;
First line was real nice personal, second..eh no
You must be Ill Mentally, even tryna out verse this mortar,
I jus fuck'n Diagnosed and Served you, here's ur Diss-order;
I think its already been said but dissorder lines are played..cmon, you knew that..
****
Judge-
coward doing nething to make and take the piss
but how you spost to connect a punch..
..when everylines like-----this;
Hmm..so so punch...ok opener
turn you crazy like epilectics...having a fit
i no i dropp'd second..but you live to be next to $pit(sig)
Nice sig punch & personal..seen this kinda diss alot though..
ill kurupt your style..
..and shot you like a dillinger
ive beaten most of your crew..now u no y i look so familiar
Kinda blah here..prolly weakest bar
check'd your verse..to be honest..it wasnt fit for this board
cus you seem'd like prisoners wanting out..
..desperate for that level record(4-4)
Nice actually..liked the thought and creativity..
mix some black with a bad boy..still cant cum like-whoa
aisle gave me a rappad victory last week..
..and now through me a KayOhh.
Started as what I thought was gunna be another dumb sexual joke, but very nice closer..creative name punch/personal..
Damn. This was hella close..kayohh was really consistent in his wordplay approach, which brought in creativity..however it hurt his punches and personals. Judge came with more punches and personals, less wordplay, but still had some creativity mixed in. Ima have to give this to judge, mostly because I believe that personals win battles alot, and judge just had more categories in his favor..it was close though, nice battle.
Vote- Judge
Kay Ohh- Very nice wordplay, however it took away from the punch itself. I liked your second bar the best, and also your opener was decent too. But the 3rd bar seemed forced, good setup in the second to last bar, the punch then fell off. Last line is very much played. But decent drop though.
Judge- Second bar was very, very nice, liked that punch a lot. Personals can be very much hard hitting and I haven't seen it if it is played. Also liked the last line a lot, but put a better set-up than something with cum. The record line was nice, again a nice personal but the familiar line wasn't great. Good drop though.
Overall, I'm gonna give this to Judge because of his personals, they hit harder than kay Ohh's wordplay. Very close though and respect to both, pz.
3-1......thanks alot everyone......................
aight battle seen both of you come wayy iller tho..
ok..
Kay:Nice verse in my opinion, went straight for the heart, good punches, wordplay was good..and a some decent personals..
''Aint takin chances with this battle, like throw'n Dice,
Merk Judge Per-roll, leave him Slippin tryna Surf-ice;
'Soon as name ^ punches are played out you'll probly be elite,
But no one Defends ur Honor... so I continue slash'n At-ur-knees;''---This was bit was dope..
Overall good verse..quick and straght to the point..
Judge:Good verse aswell..i just don't like your structure..and using bold didn't help your situation...you also had some personals and punches, but there were a few played conecpts there too..ive seen you coem much more direct then this before..
''coward doing nething to make and take the piss
but how you spost to connect a punch..
..when everylines like-----this;
^ aight not bad .....except the lines are what connects the punch..
turn you crazy like epilectics...having a fit
i no i dropp'd second..but you live to be next to $pit(sig)''--This part was blaze..but then after that you kinda fell off..
Overall decent verse, but lacked the edge that Kay had (in my opinion)..
V-Kay..
Honest vote guys..no hate..
Peace
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Brass knuckles Per-mitt, still couldnt Drive a hard punch bitch,
State ID card say'n ur dope, ... haven't seen a worst Lie-since;
very nice
Aint takin chances with this battle, like throw'n Dice,
Merk Judge Per-roll, leave him Slippin tryna Surf-ice;
good
'Soon as name ^ punches are played out you'll probly be elite,
But no one Defends ur Honor... so I continue slash'n At-ur-knees;
no
Until Fusion too is here, for an Instant then falls off,
See I own each one of ur Cliques, ... ha jus like Microsoft;
nope
You must be Ill Mentally, even tryna out verse this mortar,
I jus fuck'n Diagnosed and Served you, here's ur Diss-order;
played
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coward doing nething to make and take the piss
but how you spost to connect a punch..
..when everylines like-----this;
decent
turn you crazy like epilectics...having a fit
i no i dropp'd second..but you live to be next to $pit(sig)
good
ill kurupt your style..
..and shot you like a dillinger
ive beaten most of your crew..now u no y i look so familiar
no
check'd your verse..to be honest..it wasnt fit for this board
cus you seem'd like prisoners wanting out..
..desperate for that level record(4-4)
ok
mix some black with a bad boy..still cant cum like-whoa
aisle gave me a rappad victory last week..
..and now through me a KayOhh.
nice wordplay
KayOhh had the best bar in the battle with his opener...but fell of...Judge came good throughout..
Vote=Judge for more consistency in his punches
kay-
Brass knuckles Per-mitt, still couldnt Drive a hard punch bitch,
State ID card say'n ur dope, ... haven't seen a worst Lie-since;
haha...not bad
Aint takin chances with this battle, like throw'n Dice,
Merk Judge Per-roll, leave him Slippin tryna Surf-ice;
wack
'Soon as name ^ punches are played out you'll probly be elite,
But no one Defends ur Honor... so I continue slash'n At-ur-knees;
pretty good
Until Fusion too is here, for an Instant then falls off,
See I own each one of ur Cliques, ... ha jus like Microsoft;
weak
You must be Ill Mentally, even tryna out verse this mortar,
I jus fuck'n Diagnosed and Served you, here's ur Diss-order;
played
judge-
coward doing nething to make and take the piss
but how you spost to connect a punch..
..when everylines like-----this;
weak
turn you crazy like epilectics...having a fit
i no i dropp'd second..but you live to be next to $pit
haha nice..good personal
ill kurupt your style..
..and shot you like a dillinger
ive beaten most of your crew..now u no y i look so familiar
decent
check'd your verse..to be honest..it wasnt fit for this board
cus you seem'd like prisoners wanting out..
..desperate for that level record(4-4)
decent
mix some black with a bad boy..still cant cum like-whoa
aisle gave me a rappad victory last week..
..and now through me a KayOhh.
not bad..lol
Yeah um, close battle, both had a few nice punches, but kay also had a couple terrible ones while judge was pretty good throughout.
V/judge
5-2 thanks very much EVERYONE who took the time..nice battle kay
^ Yes, thx everyone.
Kay
Brass knuckles Per-mitt, still couldnt Drive a hard punch bitch,
State ID card say'n ur dope, ... haven't seen a worst Lie-since;
ha good wordplay
Aint takin chances with this battle, like throw'n Dice,
Merk Judge Per-roll, leave him Slippin tryna Surf-ice;
eh... didn't really feel this one
'Soon as name ^ punches are played out you'll probly be elite,
But no one Defends ur Honor... so I continue slash'n At-ur-knees;
ok, decent
Until Fusion too is here, for an Instant then falls off,
See I own each one of ur Cliques, ... ha jus like Microsoft;
decent personal
You must be Ill Mentally, even tryna out verse this mortar,
I jus fuck'n Diagnosed and Served you, here's ur Diss-order;
not really a punch
Judge
coward doing nething to make and take the piss
but how you spost to connect a punch..
..when everylines like-----this;
HUH? no
turn you crazy like epilectics...having a fit
i no i dropp'd second..but you live to be next to $pit(sig)
ouch, dope LOL
ill kurupt your style..
..and shot you like a dillinger
ive beaten most of your crew..now u no y i look so familiar
not really a punch on Kay
check'd your verse..to be honest..it wasnt fit for this board
cus you seem'd like prisoners wanting out..
..desperate for that level record(4-4)
nah
mix some black with a bad boy..still cant cum like-whoa
aisle gave me a rappad victory last week..
..and now through me a KayOhh.
Ha good play on the name
This was actually close..... Judge had the two harder personals, and I have to give it to him this time. Kay you really had no personals at all, but your wit was def sharper.... but those two personals Judge threw were good enough to take it
vote - Judge
Judge wins, closed.
The Judge (4-5)
KayOhh (4-4)