.illitical. Vs Beasttez2

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"beasttez" Man your a crackhead and so go take a test by pissing in a cup.....
You new becuz you said
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Originally Posted by beasttez2
u first i setted it up

Pointless quote - punch wasn't there - decent setup - .25
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This guys a newb and Im a pro so stay in ya kindergarden level.........
Bitch my flows will spit acid in ya eyes like if ya was (Dare Devil).........
decent simile - decent punch - .4
"Beasttez" what ever your name is... you should know im the boss...........
He so gey instead of catching footballs he catch dicks like (Randy Moss)
I don't get it - is Moss gay? - didn't connect with me - .35
Yo Watch out nigga becuz im a verus and ya computer about to get hacked..
This Niggas a phycho he get shitted on than his XL's get stacked.........
half-decent wordplay - nothing that hard hitting - .35
Hes a Poke'mon person staying at home dressed like a freak.............
But bitch this is my 10th line so Stay on ya losing streak................
ok closer - about the same tempo throughout - .35
Overall - 3.4

checkit ill u know u caint fuk wit the beast/
i was on the FRONTLINE u SLAPPIN ya BITCH in the street/
no punch here - .2
when u pee u still gotta wipe u piss on ya balls/
bullets open up ya chest like a carton of hauls/
fed here - .0
and i dont have to worry bout a loss/
allin ya gurl mouth like after dinner dental floss/
ok simile - .5
and i could get u merked out no matter the cost/
catch 84 to ya back like randy moss/
fed here - .0
leave blood on ya ribs like sauce/
this line ten now tell me who’s really getting a loss/
fed here - .0
Overall - .7

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Vote: .ILLITICAL.

oh sorry for double posting - but please go poll a vote on my topical battle against "young" now...

Comeone people vote this my last uppin....Leave links Ill return the favor....aight

Ill took this easily...

He incorporated metas, attempts at wordplay, and overall, hit harder because if it.

Beast just more or less talked to his opponent, used played as hell "girlfriend" disses, and even fed a bit off the Randy Moss line.

And if it wasn't a feed, couldn't you come up with another concept?
It was JUST USED 2 HOURS AGO AGAINST YOU!

I actually think you used too many metas, it's almost every line had one...
And kinda whack ones too (sauce), and what didn't have one was strictly filler.
Not really any clean punches because he had no set ups whatsoever.

Peace

Ill - opener was alright until it got to the quote which seemed quite pointless and didn't really hit.

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This guys a newb and Im a pro so stay in ya kindergarden level.........
Bitch my flows will spit acid in ya eyes like if ya was (Dare Devil)........

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Nice flow, good wordplay, ok punch.
Randy Moss line, lmao, gay jokes are quite played but this was quite creative.

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Hes a Poke'mon person staying at home dressed like a freak.............
But bitch this is my 10th line so Stay on ya losing streak................

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ok finisher, ok punch but with good wordplay and flow

beast - no offence but your shit was wack (my opinion), your punches just did not hit, a lot of them were played, you fed (rules are rules), it just wasn't really creative, although everyone has to start somewhere, go to cypher and jus get some practice in

Vote= Ill