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Daz-ok punches not the best..liked the
pimp my ride line but...mom jokes are a no
shoulda re-worded it diff...fine flow good
rhyme scheme nothin wrong wit that
a little creative...
Trip-I liked the In-ta-Jerz...had me rollin',
ok punches also...not very creative either
rhyme scheme n flow was the same old
Dr. Suess flow...I saw like 1 multi
My V/Trip...for the only quotable line in here...In-Ta-Jerz...
vote on my battle wit Lil E's its at the very top of Front Lines...
daz-good flow, nice structure i liked the disses like that pimp m ride, but the mama jokes have to go, it was an alright verse with lil complexity
trip-it was newbish to me, you werent really dissing him, just saying rhymes about what you are going to do to him, work on your creativity, wordplay, and all that good stuff
vote, daz cause he had a the better disses, and a bit more advance than trip
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Coo.....preciate the votes.....Syn....I'll peep ya battle.......
Daz... ur verse was good... ur structure wasn't really good tho.... punchlines? ok... u should work on them
Trip... ur verse was better bcoz ur disses were good... but ur structure was weak, but its aight... good punchlines, all that....
Vote=Trip
...now can 1 of u plz vote on 1 of my battles? u'll find the links on my sig.
peace
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Uppin.............Drop Links An I'll Check Ya Battles.......................
i voted for this battle... now can one of u vote for mine:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=125823
Im gonna vote for Trip Marxx his lines were good especially the lost cause line that was good.
v/Trip Marxx
Vote on this battle
Daz took this because of his better disses.
His flow was immaculate & it made a better
read. His personals were aiight but he was a
lil rusty.
Trip needs to work on his punches, but his flow
was alrite.
V/ Daz
Vote on this..
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=125650
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some of these gay votes gotta go homie.....and this is my 3rd upp i believe
I feel ya..........................gonna up this one more time........................
Daz-Nice easy flows..Aight structure...Some good personals
and like 2 hard punches...Not complexy...Also nice
Vocab...easy ta read...Work on punches more
and progress and ya will be tight
Trip-Came a lil bit hardder..Nice structure...You
had more hard punches than Daz..Easy ta read to
Complexy(NAH)work on ya punch lines
aight
v/Tripp marxx
Return the facor against me and parkcide...Look at front lines aight to find it
uppin
Uppp.............................................. ........................
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