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Mr. E- Decent verse, but it wasn't all that good....Punches were okay but they kinda sucked yoiu didnt come hard on dem and sometimes they didnt make snese....Structure was pretty bad need to fix that up...overall your new and you need to elevate on you punches and try to elevate on your structure...
Wirhgtmak17- Verse was okay wsn't all dat good but better then Mr.E's....Punches were pretty good again way better then his...Structure was decent ...Your wordplay was also a little okay....Your personals were good...but you should have more personals...but you get my vote for better verse & punches...
Vote- wrightmak
i will poll my vote soon...when you hit my battle up(Honest & Explained vote please)
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=124874
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uppin^^^^^^^^^^
we need some votes
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mr.E - ya gotta work on ya structure the punches were nothin special they were aight. flow i thought was off at times. you didnt really have any wordplay. i mean overall it was so-so u got to come harder
wright-ya came harder with better punches ya flow was better and you had a better structure overall ur verse was a level above his
it was foolish for you to mess with somebody way over your head
it took you three days to spit cuz u were to stupid to find this thread
^^^good personal i liked it
vote-wright
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Uppin ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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Wrightmak17 is disqualified due to excessive upping
*Every post after vereses, is concidered as an up*
Mr.E wins
closed.
