Battle of undefeated...lyricallyabbusiv vs. Catalist

since u versin me....u mite actually gain experience.....maybe
But imma leave this kid 'shaking'....more than da guy in hiz avy!!
ok personal, not great
"Try to beat me"??......but wait..i am the one that is winning.....
I think so...cuz i got many 'hits',n its da bottom of da 9th inning..
attempt at meta, but screwed
Even if ya payed me 2 win this ...u still culdnt call it your 'own'...
hes dope?..but wen it comes 2 Meters...
his prescnece is unknown!
LOL, nice
I beat the undefeated?..plze...this battle was my pleasure...
I won this battle by a mile...heres a ruler...go and measure!!!
punch directed wrong...kinda ok meta i guess
There, CONGRATS!..cuz u are the 8th on my list 2 be depleted..
This bitch is with his mom?*cough*-prewriting,but still defeated*
meh...nah...wasnt feelin for a closer


7-0 ,Damn, kid's better than I thought, To you, I tip my hat
Then again, I looked at the people he's beaten.........
............And 7 times wondered...Who the Fuck Is That?!!
meh...ok. Kinda funny
Hoping I would No Show, Well now I'll have to condemn
Quote:
Originally Posted by Lyricallyabusiv
I aint gettin respect 4 versin noobs that r callin me out

Hmmm, Really? Thats funny, You've already faced 7 of them!
stretched!!!! but still good line
A ticket to hell? Wow just look at your crew
I've Already defeated All of those people....
...............And just included you!
lol, kinda good
Thought I would come wack, Kid was ready to rejoice
Quote:
Originally Posted by Lyricallyabusiv
1. masturbate

Was asked how he spent his free time......
............And look at his number one choice!
strecttttttttchhhheddddddd!!! damn...but nice attempt
This kids a newb, cant even keep his own name too
Cuz I could see You got your first Loss.....
............From the way I Lyrically Abused You!
played on his name...very played

overall, both didnt come hard at all. Didnt really like readin neither.

breakdown:
flow: lyric
structure: lyric
punches: catalist
personals: tie
metas: lyric
multies: neither
opener: catalist
closer: neither


catalist had the punches but his verse was choppy and hard to read, and that SOMTIMES losses you the battle...like this for example.

v/lyriclyabussiv, for decent punches, played but decent, and good flow.

honest vote, no hate, good battle

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. Crew vote. - Axiom

thats a crew vote right there buddy

that will be removed

uppin 1

Not a bad battle.


lyricallyabbusiv -

since u versin me....u mite actually gain experience.....maybe
But imma leave this kid 'shaking'....more than da guy in hiz avy!!
Nice creativity and personal, first line was kinda choppy
"Try to beat me"??......but wait..i am the one that is winning.....
I think so...cuz i got many 'hits',n its da bottom of da 9th inning..
I agree with rascal, shoulda used this towards the end..nevertheless, it was an ok bar
Even if ya payed me 2 win this ...u still culdnt call it your 'own'...
hes dope?..but wen it comes 2 Meters...
his prescnece is unknown!
Funny first line, 2nd was wrong...at least you knew it was
I beat the undefeated?..plze...this battle was my pleasure...
I won this battle by a mile...heres a ruler...go and measure!!!
Prolly the weakest of all your bars, seemed a bit forced..
There, CONGRATS!..cuz u are the 8th on my list 2 be depleted..
This bitch is with his mom?*cough*-prewriting,but still defeated*
Good closer, I woulda quoted him though with the mom line, and played off that..

Overall, you came pretty good man. I think you might have focused on the undefeated a little too long, but all in all I saw witty lines and alot of creativity. Pretty good verse.

Fav line:

Quote:

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Even if ya payed me 2 win this ...u still culdnt call it your 'own'...

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*******

Catalist -

7-0 ,Damn, kid's better than I thought, To you, I tip my hat
Then again, I looked at the people he's beaten.........
............And 7 times wondered...Who the Fuck Is That?!!
Lol, funny opener..nice flip from compliment to diss
Hoping I would No Show, Well now I'll have to condemn
Quote:
Originally Posted by Lyricallyabusiv
I aint gettin respect 4 versin noobs that r callin me out

Hmmm, Really? Thats funny, You've already faced 7 of them!
Again, funny..careful not to overuse a concept..him battling newbs in this case...nice though
A ticket to hell? Wow just look at your crew
I've Already defeated All of those people....
...............And just included you!
Ok..wasnt feeling this too much..thought you coulda played off the ticket to hell quote..
Thought I would come wack, Kid was ready to rejoice
Quote:
Originally Posted by Lyricallyabusiv
1. masturbate

Was asked how he spent his free time......
............And look at his number one choice!
Nice personal, lol..good research
This kids a newb, cant even keep his own name too
Cuz I could see You got your first Loss.....
............From the way I Lyrically Abused You!
Good play on his name, but weak overall closer..

Overall, you put out some funny and witty lines, quote personals were nice, and you definitely did some good research on him. Personals hit hard, except maybe for the closer one..kinda wack...nice verse man, came hard.

Fav line:

Quote:

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7-0 ,Damn, kid's better than I thought, To you, I tip my hat
Then again, I looked at the people he's beaten.........
............And 7 times wondered...Who the Fuck Is That?!!

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..I have to give my vote to Catalist, because he came harder and I thought much more personal and witty..enjoyed his verse a lil more too. lyrically, you prolly woulda got this if you woulda re-structured your verse and added more spice to your lines, but Cat came too hard and funny/witty in this. Nice battle though.

Vote / Catalist

Plz hit this back..thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=125149

we are not an established crew stupid....read the rules. Vote counts, and I didnt even know that he was in my crew until u pointed out stupid. Take a vote cry baby...

Vote on this shit in return!!!

The opening bar in Abusive's verse was bad, bad, bad...
Every diss in the world has been spit at that dancing avy.
And besides, "leave you shakin" isn't a punch, it's a threat, a prediction.

Cat's opener was a punch, clear cut, personal, and very effective.

Abusive's second bar was crap as well...
Sorry for being blunt...but none of that baseball shit equaled a punch, maybe an eh meta, but no punch at all.

Catalist basically repeated his opening bar, we get it, he's faced no one of merit...
Ever hear of beating the dead horse? Still, even though it's repetition, it still beats baseball.

I see the punch that Abusive's going for in the 3rd bar, just didn't think it hit all that hard...at least it connected though.

Nice crew diss from Cat. Straight forward, no wordplay, but effective cuz the truth hurts.

Ok, 4th bar by Abusive has wordplay, yeah...cool...but no fuckin punch!!! Just another prediction Seriously! What did you throw at him? I'll tell you what, the fuckin ruler and that's it!!!

Too long and drawn out and badly worded by Cat...plus, quote punches are played. And kinda show ya need help dissing, visual aid kinda thing. SOme of em can still be good, but this one wasn't. Still...it WAS a punch, despite it's whackness, which is more than Ab threw.

Kinda weak closers on both sides, predictable nameplay from Cat and
some kinda weird accusation from Ab...and, the nameplay kinda topped that "prewriting with mom" shit.

Cat all the way.
Not extremely impressive.
Seen you come better.

Peace

ehhh...ill let that crew vote go

uppin 2

since u versin me....u mite actually gain experience.....maybe
But imma leave this kid 'shaking'....more than da guy in hiz avy!!

^^nice personal..flow ok

"Try to beat me"??......but wait..i am the one that is winning.....
I think so...cuz i got many 'hits',n its da bottom of da 9th inning..

^^no...just..no..not good...at all.


Even if ya payed me 2 win this ...u still culdnt call it your 'own'...
hes dope?..but wen it comes 2 Meters...
his prescnece is unknown!

^^ok...attempt at a personal(ithink)..not great..

I beat the undefeated?..plze...this battle was my pleasure...
I won this battle by a mile...heres a ruler...go and measure!!!

^^not much of a punch..ok

There, CONGRATS!..cuz u are the 8th on my list 2 be depleted..
This bitch is with his mom?*cough*-prewriting,but still defeated*

^^great closer...best punch of ur pec...specailly 2nd line..

punches...7
flow...7
wordplay..6
personals..6
vocab...7
overall....32 not a bad verse....( i think ur better then that )




7-0 ,Damn, kid's better than I thought, To you, I tip my hat
Then again, I looked at the people he's beaten.........
............And 7 times wondered...Who the Fuck Is That?!!

^^killed the openr...great punch..!

Hoping I would No Show, Well now I'll have to condemn
Quote:
Originally Posted by Lyricallyabusiv
I aint gettin respect 4 versin noobs that r callin me out

Hmmm, Really? Thats funny, You've already faced 7 of them!

^^nic personal...nice punch..

A ticket to hell? Wow just look at your crew
I've Already defeated All of those people....
...............And just included you!

^^could flow...nice punch..

Thought I would come wack, Kid was ready to rejoice
Quote:
Originally Posted by Lyricallyabusiv
1. masturbate

Was asked how he spent his free time......
............And look at his number one choice!

^^lol..gave me a lil chuckle..nice

This kids a newb, cant even keep his own name too
Cuz I could see You got your first Loss.....
............From the way I Lyrically Abused You!


nice use of his name against him...good punch..


punches...9
flow...8
wordplay..8
personals..8
vocab...7
overall....40 ...he hit with a punch every time..and came with a good style...and very solid pec..and that wins him battles..and he just won another in my eyes...


VOTE..CATALIST


other kat...i think ur better then that...but my 2cents..

VOTE...CATALIST

pec

i wont vote cus me and cat are cool

no d/r conspiracy's

but if you voted for lyrically

you should quit rapping right now

not that your verse sucked

but you got ripped like tight underwear on a fat bitch bending down homey

end this please......

uppin 3.........good battle abusive

yea...nice battle....mite actually batle again sumtime:)...uppin this
!!

uppin 4 for you fuckin losers

close this

*cough* return vote favor plz *cough*

uppin 5 ....you suck

vote..ill i'll get to yours eleventually....for some reason i cant open your battle....

aight man this was a close battle
LA had good shit but i felt that. . .
catalist was a lil more consistent
with punches and personals aight
LA wasnt far off but could of re-. . .
worded it a lil better in a sense ok
i felt catalist had an advantage cuz
he droped second, so it should of. . .
been a blindspit 30 min or something
but vote/catalist for being a lil more. . .
direct, cata, but not by much, good
battle you guys, both of u are elavating

Because Catalist was banned for being a biter, all of his wins are being reversed. As the admins told me I could do this, it is being done on EVERY battle of his.