Lol@this battle
Adz - Elevate. Before you battle again, get a feel for whats kinda expected here. Read other battles, shit like that. You had a lot of blah in your verse..fix up the structure like this
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..instead of hi my names kyle/got a wack style/wheres my nail file/ ... that stuff..you'll get the hang of it man, dont worry.
B2K - Lol. I liked the closer alot, I'm a fan of playing on peoples names, they make good personals, and you did a nice one. I agree with Cat, it was one of your more simpler verses that I've read from ya, but you didnt need to bring much. Nonetheless, you came creative and effective. Also, funny diss on his birth year...lol .. you know you won this, nice job..as usual.
Vote / B2K
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=125149
^ hit this back plz, thanks
