aiight man thanks for voting and giving some feedback in this battle ill hit your 2 battles that you got up.. peace
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aiight man thanks for voting and giving some feedback in this battle ill hit your 2 battles that you got up.. peace
uppin for more votes in this battle................
lmao..
"smiley" got this with ease..:laugh:
to the other dude, you need to work on:
A) Flow
B) Rhyme scheme
C) Personals
D) Punches
E) Creativity
F) <--- the grade your verse recieved..lol
No hate man, you need to elevate badly..personals and creativity/wittyness are what sticks out most in a battle..didnt see any of that in your verse. Structure was prolly your best thing, even that was a little messed up though. Elevate dawg..quick.
:) - You easily got this, however I wasnt too impressed with your verse bro..you had a couple personals that were decent, flow was pretty good..structure was perfect..at least you rhymed..lol. I've read some previous drops by you before, and you've came ALOT harder and more witty in previous battles. You won this easily however, keep doin yur thing..
Vote / "smiley" lol
Will poll once ya peep battle in sig..too many sleepers around here
Peace..
lol.. yeah aiight man im just playing with niggas now.. ya know.. anyways upping for votes
streets, aight verse, nothing really suprising,
in my opinion i think your verse was to simple,
you need some harder punches, and i'm not even
sure if i saw 1 meta, and your personlas were horrible,
but keep elevating.
smiley, you had a nice verse, your punches was good,
the one i liked was about his homepage having its own
fee, and your opener was aight, your personals were ok
but you should still work on them, keep elevating.
my vote:smiley
return the favor.
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=124235
damn man lets wrap this battle up.........im up 4 to 0 right now.. drop some more votes people
Personals-:)
Punches-""
Flow-""
Structure-Both
Opener-:)
Closer-""
Overal-:)
Come on now this wasent even a battle at all. Mr. :) dominated in every category. Everything was pretty good.
Street you really need to elevate, your stuff dident rhyme and it hardly flowed at all, look at some of tutorials.
Please Drop A Vote:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=124250
Streetz-you started off aight but then some of your words stopped rhyming and it threw ya flow all off...work on your structure...another thing was lack of personals...thats a big part of battling so look through some peeps previous posts to try to find dirt on them or something
favorite lines::)-pretty good verse...nice flow made it easy to read...your punches hit pretty hard...good dropQuote:
Originally Posted by StrEETZ101
favorite lines:return tha favor and hit up my battle vs MDR please(only 1 more vote needed)Quote:
Originally Posted by :)
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