Wrightmak17 vs. Cjilla a.k.a Cj

I changed my whole style no more ****** that was gat if you think about it But Mak im not gonna let you win that easy There may be some spelling errors But You'll get my point

hey dumass, you dont just start another battle in an existing battle, you have to make a new thread

but if you do wanna battle, make a new thread

close one. both verses were ok. structure was really bad on CJ's part and ok with Wrights. you both needed to elevate a little more tho in this. you had ok punches, not bad. your flows were good. Cj had a couple trouble flowing by the way he switched it up a bit within his paragraph. lol. no true personals. but overall, ima give this to Wright for a better overall verse. props to both.

vote-Wrightmak

peace

uppin again, come on 1 more vote needed! vote honestly though

one more vote, i just wanna clear up my existing battles

vote for who you think won, but please get it over wit

Ummm yea..

Dude with the weird name, change your style completely..need to work on structure, flow, personals..dont worry, you'll get the hang of the RB styles and shit, just takes time. Read on other battlers, see how they do it. Dunno if this is your first board or just another, but learn whats accepted and whats not before ya battle, just a suggestion.

wright, basically, you merked, even though it wasnt that great of a drop. it was enough to take this. personals were kinda weak, at least you made an attempt and they were there, everything else was aight, maybe vocab could use some work..

Vote / wright


Peace..