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Hyper Actyve- Good verse, punches were okay. But you got killed sorry to say. I saw that you had too many pauses it looked like. Your flowz were decent, and so were your metas, but there wasn't any wordplay, and your personals were okay not the greatest.
Vanja- Your verse was nice. You had better punches then him. Your structure was nice. Personals were okay. But the reason you get my vote is you had better punches, and you had better wordplay.
vote- Vanja
i will poll once you hit my battle ...peace http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=122916
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Alright...
hyper- I guess u know whats coming from me. I like that you keep trying new things and trying to elevate more though. Way too many "......" if you wanna use that style, it can be done without those. Your punches were lacking in this verse, and personals... the new style messed up ur flow and strucutre. But keep at it
vanja- Your verse was decent. You came really nice in a few areas, but not all. You had harder hitting punches then ur opponent and a few personals in your verse. All in all it was pretty good.
vote- vanj
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Hmm..
HYPER -- First thing that comes to mind? Plain. Nothing really caught my eye in this drop man..I agree with the structure move, gotta do something about that. Punches were general at best, flow was actually ok for the most part..the structure kinda made it choppy at points but, eh, ok..and whats up with the closer? That was basic man..close to filler kinda.....
Vanja -- Wordplay was pretty dope. IQ line has been used to death tho..other than that not bad in that area..Came with a few personals, they were aight, try and stay away from sex jokes, they're kinda played out...your wasnt so bad, just gets old reading common ones over and over..ya know? Structure was nice, beginning flow was kinda hard, but really smoothed out after first bar or 2..not a bad drop..
Overall, my vote goes to Vanja for simply haveing a more complete verse and bringing it harder..also edged him out in most of the 'voting' categories too
Vote / Vanja
Peace..
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UM lol was this a battle.....
Hyper YOu wack KID
Didn't rhyme flow no wordplay no punches besides ONE
Vanja came with a lil more but really wasn't all that HOt.....
he brung more direct punches and flow was on point and wordplay was aiight
so with that said
Vote Vanja
By the way i wanna battle you both aiight
