Ace vs Perpetual

wtf?^^^^^^^^^
this was a topical battle, not akeystyle battle

but thanks for the props every1, im only 14 so im just starting so thanks for the votes

upping #2

^yea, you came good. im 16. maybe by my age you'll be even better. =)

Quote:

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Originally Posted by PERPETUAL

when it comes to my words, consider them the hercules of lyrics
because mine over-power the opinion of a million
my rhymes are powerful, you can actually feel the force of my rage
i engage with verbal spray to judge subjects and to show-off on the stage
ghnadi said words never hurt but i express my mind with force
and i endorse my self-expression until im classified as a corpse
i curse to show my serious matter and also to make time-elapse
i make other opinion collapse until they agree with my mine
i use words to unveil what is hidden in my membrane
and i never strain to use my voice offensively and so postively
words got the ability to destroy a persons self-esteem
and they got the strength to support someone reach they're dream
hopw you didnt forget

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my name is YOUNG-G
ya dont know me
i dont knowyou
but right now its time to insault you
i'ma burn yo ass agen, i wont forget
next time ya gonna choke and forfet
i'm like m from 8mile
n yo PAPA DOC dat got his ass burned after i freestyled
i'm a bad guy look
ya piss me off i'ma pull yo throat out wit a hook
i gotta go cuz i gotta eat
wen i see you i'ma cut yo feet
PEACE!!!!!

garbage^someone delete that, i could post up a better verse than that

upping 3

Vote- Ace

His verse was a story, probably about an ex or sumthing. It flowed in every part and had meaning to it. He threw nice multies in there which made it flow alot nicer.

The other dude was just goin on about himself, and that is not what a topical is really about. Dont revolve around yourself in a topical, or brag about your words of power cuz thats not the point

Easy win for Ace

Ace since u can pooll, u mind hittin up one of my battles for once lol, thanks make it fair

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...54#post1306754