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This was a bit one sided
Kracka came ok, but totally lacked any creativity. Played punches, weren't too hard either....a few multis, but those are kinda useless without punches......
Trog came better....used some cool personals.....flowed nicely....came creative...just an overall better verse...
Best line-
wit temperatures that reach 100 degrees its no wonder ur gettin burned
people dont stop to notice Kracka as far as his Interests are concered
lol..pretty nice
V/trog.
pz
upiinnnn.....
up.......up......and awayyyyyy...........
Kracka:
Ok simplistic verse, however there was some wit present.
You need harder hitting personals and punches. I seen some
In the beginning. Structure was a little bit off but I still could
Follow, next time try hard hitting punches with wit. Oh yes
You had some ok disses in the middle portion of your verse.
Trogdor:
Ok nice try with personals , but it didn’t have any effect. Wit wit
Need hard hitting personals and punches. Structure was par..
Try working on structure but mostly personals and punches.
Your flow was there so that’s a good one. Your beginning was better
At the end fell a little off.
Vote: Kracka only because his disses hit harder.
Peace.. Stay elevating
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116939
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114316
^ Please return favor and vote here…needs to be closed
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Kracka - I thought your verse was elimentary, like your punches were weak and like the rest said lacked creativity u know. Weak wordplay, metas and vocab.
Flow i could follow so that was good.
Trogodor - Yours was aight man, I liked your punches and personals better really. felt it had more creativity in em. And u had some wordplay too so that was tight.
Basicly your punches were better and thats what wins battles.
Structure was a little whacky, so u could improve that and ittl help the flow.
Vote - Trogodor
Plz hit this up.....http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=122869