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Trogodor - your punches were not that complex. Flow was a little off, i still dont kno why you used an underwear line.. that is just nasty! You didn't have many personals, and your structure was messed up in a few places... Not that great of a verse, elevate.
Born to Kill - Your punches were a bit harder hitting. Flow was also better. And your opener made me laugh, so did the line about all of your merkings were at home with their mother. Your verse was a bit more complex, and harder hitting. Structure was short and straight to the point. And your creativity was just a little better.
Weak battle tho.. but i'm goin with Born to Kill
V/Born to Kill
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...34#post1313034
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Structure goes to B2k and the flow as nice man tro needs to work on that
Punches tro i felt yours was too force and u need more direct punches and a few was played but b2k nice punches more direct punches in there
personals B2k Took this one also his was more better they went will with the conpects and etc
Mutis really not none but b2k had a few and they were ok
meta4s was ok and not many in there
wordplay sick wordplay b2k u have nice wordplay yo
overall b2k
return the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=123133
