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fav line of the battle
this mother fucker is talkin about damageing peeps with his heat........
kidd i'll pull ya heart out your chest and rap ta the beat..........
Other than that, And1 took it. He had very nice multi's and creativity. His vocab was complex. The only negative feedback i give him are his stretched lines and structure. Try and cut those down so it's easier to follow.
For the other dude, yoou had better flow and structure i'de say. But your lines were too basic, not many meta's, similies or wordplay. try to make more creative lines like the one about you beatin to his heart. although it wasnt all that, it was your best.
Please hit this up honestly.......thank you dont overlook it.....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117412
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Can we please close this battle now Cuz i win 3-0 vote knockout in da rules....
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Just let the battle run, I dont think 3-0 KO is a rule on RB thats why the polls go up to 5 dude
Dont forget to hit up my link, im still waitin for an honest vote.......
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i know dat ......but this dude put the rules in dis thread that 3-0 is a knockout and will get win just read the first page and find out....So please close cuz i won 3-0 knockout the guy made the rules so ...??
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PM a MOD, PM born to kill
and please hit up my link dude......................fairly
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Yeah no doubt dawg...i'll hit up your links then ...
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First to 5 votes will win, none of this 3-0 = win shit..
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aight then i dont care......i was just sayin ....aight then uppin...vote people
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Upppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnn.........Vote People...........
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ahhhhh AND1MIX you are over your limit,you have posted to many times,,and will a MOD pleaz tell these herbs to quit freeposting cuz it is bullshit heres one of the herb=Trogdor,Do something about this thank you.............
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And1mix.. post again and you will be DQed for uppin too much. Since you are new.. I won't DQ you. But you're only allowed 5 ups. every post after both verses are posted are considered ups.
this is your warning.
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And1 Your structure is fuck its so damn fuck get it right bit in the that fuck up structure u also had some nice punches that was connecting and ii was feeling the wordplay and also work on ur personals if u get that down pack I think u will be a beast
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Hardhitter I wasn't feeling ur shit at all on the real a few punches here and there and some was played and ur personals need to be before work on ur wordplay and shit and soory for hitting the enter botton
my vote go to and1
return the favor
its in my sig
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can we have this last vote removed it is a incorect vote..........
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It seems i've brought you alot of raw stress, causing a mental breakdown from ur already fucked up thought process
Now you're not even cautious when spiting weak shit that you think is sick, hell it makes me nauseous
ummm.....wak.....culd of done suttin better...nice multiz tho
You're the ultimate computer nerd, this what i've learned from ur member photo
My multies leave you burnt ucz your lyrics are always rendered solo
culd work on 1st line.2nd line waz good
Quit thinking u can make this battle historic, just ur name in the title of this thread makes people ignore it
You ugly fuck, i'll make ur face even more morbid as a result of my horrid actions
umm.....where tha rhymin??.....i waz rollin on ya 1st line...
People could scream in a horror fashion but they wanna see more man whore bashin
Why would you even try to compete wit me in the first round when u were amazed by this verse and how the words sound
This is just absurd now, hardhitter is trying to act hard but obviously can't match my smarts
I used to think he was chillin cuz of his avatar but came to realize he's one of the pricks i'd punch out at the bar
umm.......wakk......
It really didn't matter if you saved the material you thought was ur best
You can't bring anything deep for these peeps to leave them impressed
i c u prolly do audio....but text aint audio......
Nobody wants to hear weak emcees fight so get off this web site before you're forced to secretly bite to be condersided tight.
wakk
overall- okay verse...sum linez were nice...otherz were juss plain wak
overall-5/10
ayo........''''and1mix'''' can you belive this bitch tellin ~n~ textin fake lies...........
ive been out, alittle rusty,but will take this win with no suprise.........
wak...culdve gone sumwhere wit it..
this mother fucker is talkin about damageing peeps with his heat........
kidd i'll pull ya heart out your chest and rap ta the beat..........
lol...2nd line waz hot.....
and im comein at you with some real shit off the top of the dome...
un like you,you searh site and come with a line off a popular poem...
umm...wak....
and And1mix says he's slangin by the bolda........
only coke this kid sell's is coke with a dash and a cola.....
lol...ok....not 2 good...
...after this u better look up to me as the illest in your eyes..........
cuz the only time this kid's on the mic is when he ask's if you want your meal super sized....
lmfaoo...nicee....
........chill herb i'll hit ya fast..........
by the time the votes come in your eyes will be hangin out ya ass.......
lmfao at da 2nd line...
now take a grasp lay back and chill fag dont get hypped.......
your not black mann your liveing a white life.......
eh...weak...wak...dont b prejudice...
meet you in audios and strangle you with the mic.......
an "AND1MIX you and leave your brain spinnin like wheel's on a bike.......
loll..nice wordplay..nice closer...
overall-7/10
i duno bout yall.....but i REALLY think dat hardhitter took this one no doubt..
i swear dis aint a d/r...but i saw dat hardhitter took this
and1- work on ya structure....
