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Melonin-Good solid verse. Punches were good, alil too
metaphoric for some to understand, but they we're
On point. Flow was good, & I like the structure.
Jonesy-Not a bad verse here mate. Some punches were
Ok, others were not that good but I think all round, Ur
flow etc was OK too...U gave a much better verse in
our battle....
V/Melonin.
hit this up
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=122216
Topical w/ Funksta.
lol uppin i'll hit ur battle up later kwizicz
Meno - nice flow nice structure and nice humor but i think u need to work on ur punches because ur concepts and punches was not hitting right and yur personals was a o k but u need work and u had some ok meta4s also
JON - u need to work on ur structure but u had some ok punches and ur personals also need work and when u get that st8 you will be ok but for having better punches and mutis and wordplay i have to give u the win
vote jonesy
return the favor
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=122456
Nice battle I thought
Menolin: you opened up with a nice bar I thought, I liked it...Had some nice multies in your entire verse...but the structure I didnt like that much....had some ok punches through out your verse....didnt hit that hard I thought, could have been better.
Jonesy: You had a good verse...The opening bar was good too....had good flow to it, even though it got a bit choppy at times but still decent...had some good punches...some were decent....had good multies as well...structure was kinda stretched at points though but still good.
Overall: it was a good battle...Close in my opinion...But Im going to have to go with Jonesy...Just felt his verse was a bit better and had the better punches of the two. Props To Both.
yah, close battle
menolin-you structure was ok, flow was pretty much consistent throughout the hole thing, except for on or to lines, yah metas were hard to understnad at first, but read through it again and it was more clear. Your punches came kind of weak, and need 2 work on your personals more, nice verse overall
jonesy-your structure and flow were a mere bit better then menolin. but still need to work on metas and personals. You still had better punches though which brought you ahead and the better flow and structure helped with it.
vote- jonesy
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http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=120540
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