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ok, my vote- and1mix
reasons:
And1mix- ur verse was aight, i like some of ya verse but not the whole thing. Ya structure was aight, not the best but aight. Ya vocab was aight, still not the best but aight. Ya wordplay was a bit better, when i red there was very few places where i didnt really get it, like why did u put something where u did. Ya personals were aight, nuthin special. and ya punches, not many, but there ones that u did have hit pretty straight on him.
Lyricallyabussive- ur verse was nothin special. The first thing that brought me further form choosing u was the fact u was feedin, not a big fan of it aight. Ya verse was pretty much the same. U did have some played lines aswell like the modern holocaust, ive seen that too much before and dont plan to see anymore.
So my votes- And1Mix, mostly because he was not the one feedin(he really couldnt, considering he spit first).
hit this up with an honest one, its weak......... i know, and i aint haten on none of yall about this battle, aight
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=122404
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hmmmmm..... i see sum dik riders....look at HPER-ACTYVES ip and then AN1MIX's....see something similaar?? YES!
plze dun d/r...cuz itz pretty obvious who won dis battle......cmon now...
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lyricallyabbusiv "Hes riting with a broken hand...but after this he'll havae two..
And yea ...this is the modern day holocaust...but ur the jew!" i was feelin that it had me rollin..good punches nas structure and better personals.....
and1mix was real played..BLAH BLAH BLAH..one sided battle and lyricallyabbusiv took this in ever catagorie...........
v/lyricallyabbusiv
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tite battle...but lyrically takes this in my eyes
he had more punches...nice personals...and nice structure
and1, i wasnt feeling your shit...it was all babble to me...but u had nice punches though....but nto as great as lyrically's
punches- lyrically, easily takes this categor
flow- tie
sturcutre- easily seen and lyric takes this
personals- lyric, i loved your opener and your closer man, had me laughin
multis- tie
vote- lyrically abbusiv for better verse
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Mmmmkk...
And1mix - overall this was pretty weak man. Nothing really stood out to me at all. Structure and flow were aiight I guess, but punches and personals were really hurtin. A lot of filler to be honest with ya..dont stop though, always room for elevation. Work on personals, thats usually what hits the hardest in battles :thumbup:
lyrically - Came much better. Wasnt the dopest verse in the world, but it was enough. Nice use of the font colors for a diss, that was prolly the line that stood out the most. Saw a few personals, at least you had some..Ditto on the structure and flow..wordplay was eh..rhyme scheme was fine.
Vote goes to lyrically, basically came more complete and had personals where as and1 was lacking them.
Vote / lyrically
Will poll once you peep my battle, tired of ppl sleepin..
Peace..
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lyrically- your verse was aight. u had punches. the flow was aight also. in da beginning u were comin at him hard, then u just started fallin off at da end. but it was aight overall.
and1- yeah ur verse was aight too. he had punches, but u had better ones. ur flow was kinda confusin, had to read it over a couple of times. but i liked da beginning when u was gettin on his "broken hand"
vote: And1mix
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and1- flow was alright and you had some totally decent lyrics. Unfortunately you had no personals and the punches just didn't hit hard.
Lyric- nice verse you came creative with it. You only had 1 or two personals but thats more than him. Punches hit hard, i was feelin your shit.
Hit my battle up with Thing and make sure you drop that vote you promised and1. Also check out I lost a friend open mic in my siggy
Peace
