cos v rapid fire

uppin 4

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cos- nice verse, you had some decent punches at rapid. personals werent bad either, ya could of thrown more but none the less the ones ya didnt hit pretty hard. flow wasnt very good. ya need work on that, structure wasnt great either but your verse was strong


rapid - not a bad verse, didnt hit really with a punch of personal, ya had some nice metas but nothin else stood out, flow was blah and structure could off been betta,
v/ overall cos takes this for hitting harder and having more decent punches and personals. hit up me

Vote-Cos

He had harder hitting punches..and I could find his flow, but dont try to use so much vocab because that wont win all your battles..I was feeling the bruce/sarah lee line and the propane/cloaked waves lines too..your line's danced around the opponent for a little bit then it finally hit her enough to cause an effect..pretty good verse

Rapid Fire-your flow was good..and so was your structure..your punches werent bad they just weren't hard hitting causing you to lose this battle..like the "im loving this breeze" is really working in this battle to have an effect on the opponent as a diss...and the last line made your verse look weird because it ended on a new line with a different syllable at the end causing the transition to sound funny..from tourists to disorder..should of atleast added an extra line or just taken that line out..but this battle was closer than it looked..

keep it up

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Rapid fire had da best flow of both emcees in dis weak battle....Cos was rippin it with more complex lines even though rapid fire isn't a girl...Rapid fire's concept of punches and shit were getting old and virgin line...shit...I ain't even going there but Cos came original and I give him props for dat...I didn't see a lot of played punches in Cos verse and his punchlines hit way harder than rapid fire...rapid fire's punches weren't going anywhere at all...Cos had da better structure and da better overall dissing verse and gets my vote for typing an original merking...Rapid needs to elevate...peace.

vote= Cos

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yo i dont mean to speak on ya thread but rapid fire you were suppose to battle me awhile back and u neva showed up nigga wuts goin on...holla at cha boi wheneva u get this 1 aight

COS-had harder punches..good flow..word play was okay...your rhyme was like you were backing up and just wanted to lay one big hit that hit him hard..pretty good verse--DECENt

Rapid Fire-your flow and structure was good..your punches werent bad but they were like BITCH SLAPS...the last line needs to be taken out never rhyme...but this battle was closer than it looked..

This was a decent battle...

VOTE--Cos

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cos
structure was ok....try and even out ur lines more though.....flow wasnt good at all....it was just everywhere but whateva.....metas were pretty good.....wordplay was decent.....some of the punches connected.....personals were ok....

rapid fire
structure wasnt that good...ur lines got increasingly larger as ur verse went through....try and even them out.....a few metas....wordplay was tight.....none of ur punches really connected....no personals....

Conclusion
neither had a good structure or flow.....both had metas....rapid had more wordplay.....cos had better punches and personals....so basing off of that....cos gets my vote....

VOTE - COS