^^^gonna say those r ur two best lines.......had wordplay, a decent punch.......but yo.....dont put ' ' around ya words......thats newbish......overall ur verse was pretty good.......structure was good.....flow was pretty good......had some metas.....wordplay was pretty nice.......some of the punches connected.......ok personals......Quote:
Originally Posted by Godfather(2)
^^^im gonna say those were ur two best lines........had a pretty good personal......overall ur verse was pretty good as well......the structure was ok.....some of the lines were kinda stretched.......flow fell off a lil......there were some metas.....wordplay was decent......most of ya punches connected.......personals were pretty good.....Quote:
Originally Posted by Macabre
conclusion - this was a close battle......pretty nice shit from both cats.......godfather had a better structure (though that is not biasing my vote at all) and flow........he also had a few more metas........wordplay was about the same from both cats.......i thought macabres punches and personals hit harder........so overall ima say macabre took the more important categories needed to win a battle, so im givin him this vote......good shit by both cats though.....
VOTE - MACABRE
