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I CAN VOTE UNTILL I GET 100 POINT BUT N-E-WAYS CAN YA HIT MY BATTLES UP AND VOTE FOR THE BEST VERSE AND WHEN I GET THE 100 POINTS BY TONIGHT I'LL COME BACK TO ON THIS BATTLE
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...2327post1292327
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=120413
uppin for the last time yo
This battle was okay, fresh you got a little too big headed when the rhymes you spit was sounding a little too good to you. a few lines didn't sound to tight because you lost your flow. Next time use sentence structure. Makes ya rhymes look better and you won't lose ya flow. but overall it was good. God father nice spit but you need a better sentence structure. The way you made your rhymes look makes us people don't want to waste time voting on the battle. So this poll may stay open for a while the way this battle was writtin. The battle was tight tho.
vote=Godfather
Its a fucking victory on my side that I'm about to summon,
I told you in advance and you still didn't see it comin,
A little cleverness - decent - .55
Posting a verse isnt wise kid... Your just exposing disgrace,
I'd post nothing and like lawyers still be closing the case,
more slight cleverness - with a multi - pretty good - .6
I dont see why theyd let ya name in when producin battle polls,
Because your fucking wacker then baby's seen seducin animals,
got a chuckle here - another multi - .6
Its like clogged arteries in dead bodies the way this ho's flowin,
You'd have left a better impression on people just by no showin,
nice punch all around - this was nice - .9
You show about as much emotion in ya pieces as inanimate objects,
You winnin this battle goes against the fuckin theory of logics,
slightly clever again - decent vocab usage throughout - .55
Overall - 6.8
Fresh the only Glock you carry is water pistols
I’ll come to ya block...............
................................. Wit surface to air missiles
kinda funny - not chuckle worthy - but alright - multi - .6
Da name’s God and I'll make you a believer
You can catch this bullets.........
........................................running like a wide-receiver
little wordplay - but not really hitting hard - .55
This guy lies thru his teeth.... when he keys.....
How u choose tha name....the freshest lines in this battle are these!
Pretty good personal idea - first one I've seen in this battle - second line is a bit stretched though - .65
So go rap about something u know like rape,
Like how ur lil sister got pissed on in R-Kelly’s Tape
Nice punch - that made me laugh - .85
Overall - 5.3
v/ Fresh - I think the biggest thing that hurt God was only going 8 lines - if you had gone two more lines you might've taken this but giving Fresh that extra punch kinda tipped the scales
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