Thanx Hyper and Withers more intelligent reviews wanted thax peopl and leave links to your open mic's and i'll give the same ..thanx peace
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Thanx Hyper and Withers more intelligent reviews wanted thax peopl and leave links to your open mic's and i'll give the same ..thanx peace
Wow.. nice
Better than i expected.
Good approach on topic
Pretty deep in emotion
But ya could work on ya
descriptioning of everything
other than taht.. it was good
Props...
UPPP dunt sleep more intelligent reviews wanted
alright, I've got some positive feedback, but listen to this first...
your lines were generic as a motherfucker... I'm tellin you, if you can predict what the next rhyming word will be then it shouldn't be that way... life-wife, to predictable, almost the whole verse was that way... But i'm not gonna knock on the way you pulled it, ya know??? you dropped nicely, and if the rhymes weren't so simple, it would have been a very nice read. But predictable rhymes can destroy a piece, so just remember that. Next time you drop, you should keep the style your rollin with, but think more before you pick a word to rhyme with...