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diverged- ok....not that interesting.....notin exciting or rare....u got 2 put more creativity in2 ur shyt......other than alllll that....itz ok....
lyric- i felt ya shyt.......mad nice...but diverge lost it 4 u.......no hate on that....
flash- titee ass shyt man....feelin every bit of it...good shyt...but ya structure waz fuked up......work on that....but u really took this one....
ace- u couldve handled this battle all on ur own.....good shyt....no probs wit anytin...nice verse....overall nice punches......g shit....
vote- flash/ ace.....
ok battle...average......
hit these up plze
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...YRICALLYABBUSIV
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...YRICALLYABBUSIV
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This was an alright battle, I don't think Lyric and Diverged tried as much of they could of...I've seen some better from both, but they were still alright, I'm not a huge fan of that type of structure but the punches were there, Lyric you had some good punches and personals same with Diverged wordplay coulda been better
Flash..Decent verse...not great a couple of good punches, little to no personals and the flow was off at times, structure was a little wacky, lucky you had an Ace up your sleeve. Ace..Nice verse..your opener was crazy, the wordplay and vocab, both nice, more personals and punches...structure made it an easy well-flowing read...props..nice job...Though I'm sure both Lyric and Diverged will come alot harder next time..
v-Ace and Flash..
return the favor...check my sig
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^thanx peepz. i'll hit those battles up a.s.a.p.
i got a question tho. do both me and Flash get this win on our rec, or just Flash?
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lyric ace and diverged all came quite hard...
ace the best of the lot
flash u had bad structure and no punches blah blah.
flow:lyric
structure:ace
punches:ace
all done pretty well except flash
(i didnt feel yours at all, elevate and cut lines a bit)
my order
ace
diverged
lyric
flash
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if it wasnt 4 flash it would have been a real hard merking
but since ace was so tight
v/ ace of aces-flash
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^thanx man......................
uppin this...........
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^to the top again. blah.
i guess i'll take this for the pride
