GodFather(2) v.s ILLunatic (Topical)

UPPIN#4
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GodFather came complex, better vocab, his flow was very well laid out and creative, however it didn't pull me in, you defned the topic well but I didn't see much creativity.

ILLunatic came good with wordplay, More basic, but your flo was overall better to me, I enjoyed reading it, pretty good writing...

I'm going to give my vote t - ILLunatic..

Illunatic had much better creativity and originality...he took a unique approach to the subject......GodFathers was good too...Both were esy reads as the flow wason target....and also both ahd pretty good omotion...I felt Illunatics vocab and imagry more tho...GodFather..you did hit the topic for the most part..but it was the same ol same ol...like whatI expected to read when I look st the topic...be creative anbd take an interesting stance


Vote Illunatic for more emotiona and hitting the topic better