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Eh...
PerpetuiLL - i was not feeling your verse at all, punches were soft.. personals were weak, structure was good.. fell off in 1 spot. Other than that.. ur flow was decent, sort of original.. Nothing really witty from you! elevate man
.iLL. - you had a decent verse, decent punches, and desent personals. Structure was also good. Very nice matter a fact.. good flow, not much wordplay.. But Eh.. you already got more categories on this than perpetuiLL did..
V/ .iLL.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=120698
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Played out battle man..
very poor...
wasn't really feeling any1's style...
but i guess ILL had an allright structureamd flow wasnt bad aswell..
V-ILL..
Peace
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Yo can't vote cuz i dont have a 100 points yet but can go and vote in my battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=120413
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Last time I checked, RB names were supposed to be original..
But he had to include my name with his, I guess he's homosexual..
^^meh... not the greatest opener... but ok.
Never heard of any rappers originating from Pencil-BaneYa..
Either way, your wack, they need to Pencil-Ban-Ya..
^^kinda funny... but kinda wack too...not sure how to feel
Omg, you're joking, you're 13 and tryin to rap on RB??..
Come back in a few years, once you master puberty..
^^ok... decent but it could have punched harder... think outside the box
And hey man, cool sig, did you shit that out yourself?..
Or gobble up some sewer remains, and barf it out yur mouth..
^^this is crap... negative points...
Maybe we can re-match sometime, battle say 8pm tonight..
Oh shit, my bad, that would be goin past your bedtime, right?..
^^ok... but very played... and I know cuz I've used a similar line...
.iLL. How whack can ya get I guess it's time to start a rumor,
about how you got murked by a cellphone, cause im givin you brain tumors,
^^this is just shitty... no wordplay at all..
to pussy to tell us about yourself so your info is left blank...,
sorta like... a theif under a ski masks expression after robbing a bank,
^^wtf?! did you just forget this was a battle and start doing topical??
battlin me try meleeing a tank, cauze man Im just rollin over you,
like cingular wireless, and the polls should be rolled over cause your number 2,
^^eeh..... this was very poorly phrased... but at least you show signs of life
like a bum in the park your with your friends talking across a flaming barrel,
and still can't spit heat even if you swallowed fire and sung a christmas carol,
^^fuck... that was the worst line for me... nothing good to say... just wack
after this knockout punch your teeth will fall to the ground and I'll be happy,
hope you can afford platinum replacements...to match that whack ass avvy...
^^tried to go personal... but this is all you could come up with?? a mediocre filler line at best...
iLL just had more stank on his punches... the wordplay was mediocre but at least he had it... PerpetuILL was just nonsensical... you need to practice on making sense and making punches... nothing you said made me go "ooooh!"
both were played.
vote = iLL
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MY LAST UP!!
Please vote we both said we'd hit back your links!!!
UPPIN # 5!!
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...38#post1281238
^^^^^^^^^^^^^hit it up plz........
Ill took this pretty easy he had hard hittin punches, and ripped him up with some personals, flow was good and was helped by an ok structure......
Per, you seemed to be swingin punches but not aimin at him very well...
the cell fone thig was aiight but didnt hit him hard enough.....
\/0te..ill..
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ILL- you came decently hard here with your punches and you were direct with them... which is always good.. flow and structure were good.. u had some really nice personals here and took from his profile.. u just came stronger overall to me
perpet- your verse was ok.. was kinda played in different areas.. everything didn't connect together all that well.. ur strucutre oculd use some work and flow.. u had some ok punches here and there but it didn't match up to ILL's
vote- ILL
