uppin...leave links..i will drop honest vote
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uppin...leave links..i will drop honest vote
uppin2,,,,,,...................................... ............................... :thefinger
uppin3........................ please dont sleep on this..............
uppin4........................ letz get some votes here people
uppin5.................... last up for this one........ not many votes...
hexen- came a little soft in this one, stretched bars and wut not. structure was ok. flow was ok. work on your stuff you got potential. not a bad drop, but i still think you coulda came better.
chrizno- you came pretty good, had a little problem wit your structure but your flow and wut not was pretty good. you had sum nice punches as well as wordplay. really nice on that aspect. you came harder wit this one.
vote- Chrizno...better punches, wordplay.
peace
Mmmk...
HeXen - In all honesty, yours wasnt all that bad, however, it really lost my interest about halfway through. You need to work on creativity and harder punches. Alot of em were pretty general, except maybe the 0-0 line, although i've seen that used many times..Elevate man..
ChriZno - You need to lose the CAPS thing, at least in my opinion, and join all of your bars together..only reason I suggest that is because I've been told the same thing when I was beginning and I got structure hits for it...besides that, you had some hard punches, one that stood out was the 'dont dodge--tear muscles' line ..lol ... you just came harder, however, you lacked personals completely..really need to work on that..Not bad...
Vote / ChriZ
return the gotdam favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=121560
hexsen should be dq'ed for 7 ups but ill leave a vote....
i didnt feel either verse...but chrizno had the better one....dont cap your punches...its looks very newbish......work on some things.....you had an ok verse...just elevate a lil
ok punches and use more personals floww as ok too
hexen had an ok verse but it was stretched and it was hard to read.....use more personals and get a better flow....elevate...this was weak\
you too gotta elevate but chrizno go this one
ok..
Hexen- I've seen u gotten a little better from when I last saw. That's a plus. You need to lose the spelling errors, ppl don't wanna have to figure that out. Week is actually Weak. That's important. Your flow was off a bit, could fix ur structure up.. reword ur lines and lose the spelling errors to make ur punches make sense and hit hard. These, to me.... didn't hit all that hard here.
Chriz - first. Lose the CAPS. ahhh... I really dislike that. If this was a close battle you probably would have lost my vote for it. Your punches were mad played, try to be a little more creative here. Use some personals, not just metas cuase most of them are played. Punches..... you had some. Some ok ideas.
vote - chriz