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Hex-
Your a wackness fanatic and arnt punch resitstent but cant reduce da habbit,
Terrorisin your rhyme wid no flow as dis battle mirros da fox vs Rabbit,
If I could understand what you were trying to say I might think the opener was ok... but it was so disjointed it kinda throws the whole verse off
Your lyrics are exaused from dopeness like da ink neva left ur pen you claim unlogically,
1,000 plus posts but u still call out newb's like ur laim Biologically,
wtf was this? this was the worst rhyming punch I've ever seen. talk about unnecessary syables and making no sense... I got what you were trying to say with the vet punch but it wasn't a punch man... it was retarded.
Kautious hidden his battle rec from da public coz da losin cloume is trebble figers,
Hes wack cant drop a verb or kill his rhyme but he's a wonab reble nigga,
He needs dis win to see dat 1 in his winnin' colume but he can only hulosinate,
Fake to a state the world can see, he jacked over his rhyme but couldnt jackulate,
lol... this was horrible. the lines don't make sense or link. You threw misspelled words together and tried to make a verse that didn't work. And what the hell does jackulate mean. Cuz I've never heard that term used to decribe 'ejaculate'... maybe if a three year old said it...
I'm not gonna finish the verse out, it was horrible man. learn to spell and make sense.
Kautious-
Okay! okay! Im…
Seized to belive im sorry for battling wack n weak new-bies like you…
Taking his name from 8-mile~ thought his “future” was to rap to! …|
k... but where's the punch?
But you fake bitch… n I can see ‘write’ through yea-thoughts…
Got this battle locked like mods…
and he caught killin him self being his own artery clots… |
concept kinda works... mods line is okay
Hex is a hazard to no one like false conjecture to forecasts…
U disappear fast…
Im sum what at heavy state on a kill em ‘die-it’ rate eating light weight food mass…|
not really...
You’ll Never last… leave this bitch in tha dark like light switching currency …
His life’s on the net… and im sure cut it off like surgery…
Claiming to his providers he’s in real connection of emergency… |
N like movie serial killa’s I would murda ya scripts wit determined disturbancy…
forced rhymes nothing too impressive here.
your style is a bit different, it's not great but not horrible, you gotta do what works for you. But the verse was better than Hex's because you had the only punch of the battle and well.... in was almost in english??
vote- Kautious
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uppin for votes 3# i think
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This is how I saw the battle
Kautious: you had a gud flow with nice wordplay and variation in your verse, you had a gud vocabulairy;you had sum ok punches that came thru hard; i would like to see more personals, you had sum but not so much; your structure was aight
HeXen: you had an ok flow with sum gud rhymes but you didn't have a lot of variation in your verse and your voc. was kinda off; your punches didn't came so hard as Kautious but they were aight; you hardly had punches and they were played, you need to work on this; your structure was aight; your nice but not gud, still need to elevate
Vote: Kautious, return the favur man, check my battle in my signature, thx.............
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uppin this n thx for voting i'll reply tonight
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Yo I got to give this to Kautious he came thought withe punches that was connecting
just right and the personals took over the battle both of you can work on
yall structure the flow was ok also but
My vote go to K
return the favor
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=122456
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom
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last uppin i think
im a half to rep this in my sig lmao this shit ain't dun yet!
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hexen, wtf was that
that shit made no sense, the punches were forced rhymes
you had no similes, no creativity, work on that
you tried to use good vocab but it was garbage and didnt make sense
and also no personasl
so my vote goes to kautiousm cause he some decent punches, like his opener
he had wordplay with this line:" Im sum what at heavy state on a kill em ‘die-it’ rate eating light weight food mass…|"
better flow, so better all around
v/k for haing more creativity and hainvg more understanble punches
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Kautious
your flow was pretty good. and you had some nice wordplay
vocab was also good.some ok punches, could of been better tho..not enough personals tho, overall not a bad verse
HeXen
your flow was kinda ok, but you didnt come very creative and you didnt have very good punches or personals, none of your punches really hit your opponent, work on them, structure wasnt great either and ya need better vocab.
v/ K for a better verse..
return the favour on my battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=134016
