Thorn VS Thing (my verse is down)

I think thing took this

Thirn...you came with too much played shit m,an...try and be more creative with ya punches personals and metas....add some originality to ya verse to emphasize ya punches....Be witty and original.....cut back on the filler and try to make every line a punch/personal/meta

Thing...you came pretty good...besides feeding which is a site rule....but you had some good punches and showed signs of wittiness...personals were ok...and a few of ya metas were nice...good verse

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Thorn -You gotta work on your originatlity look like it was all palyed. work on you punches, your multies. Try to get some more interseting vocab. Structure only needs a lil work.

Thing - Nice verse, other than the feeding. You had good flow, some nice multies. Most of the punches landed solidly, some ok personals. All around nice verse.

Thing took this with ease. He plainly came harder with better punches and multies. Other than the feeding he got this one easily

vote - Thing

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Thing fed..

Thing is a herb.. .. .. .. .. .. ..

Thorn had a good verse but most was played. Flow was ok but was lost in some places a wud say the first 2 lines was ok but thats it. Structure was good. Multis were ok, metas good.

Thing was feeding. His verse was good...Good structure...Good metas...The personals were alrite but not great...Punches were good.

vote thing had better punches

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lol im not a fackin gangster

If this was last year U wouldnt even be in my league thing lmao

peace it

Thorn - You had a few punchlines and some personals but i wasn't really feelin your verse like that but i do give u props for having an decent ok verse wit a fucked up stucture

Thing - Same thing for u too what's up wit ur fucking stucture work on it!!! i hate bad stucture but any way u came thru the win dough

Vote = Thing

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Originally Posted by Thorn

i'll send off transparent rays so u spit rite through me
that name gives me the picture of a 50s horror movie

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^^^uhh i guess those were ur two best lines.......a wack ass punch and personal......overall ur verse wasnt that good at all.....had a good structure....flow was on target.....no metas.....attempted wordplay.....but wack......punches didnt connect at all.......wack attempts at personals......

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Originally Posted by ÷Thìñg÷

ya iresistable like a comon nut scratch,i mean thorn really suits u
i jus mute you,cuz we all no prickaly things really cant pierce threw!

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^^^those were ur two best lines......had a meta......attempted personal......ok punch.......overall ur verse was decent, not the best ive seen from u, but its aight......had a good structure......flow was on target......u had a few metas.....no wordplay.....some of ya punches were ok.......attempts at personals......

conclusion - thing came with a better overall verse.....both had a good structure and flow.....thing had metas......neither had good wordplay......neither had that good of punches.....thing had a personal.....so he gets my vote......

VOTE - THING

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