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This battle was kinda weak...
There was like 2 punches thrown in the whole battle...well more punches thrown...but only like 1 or 2 decent ones...both were by ChriZno so he gets my vote
M-Ortal....get rid of the gay/sex lines...dun put spaces between ya bars....and get rid of the // at the end of ya lines...you used too much filler..your verse seemed directed at a third party and not at your opponent..keep elevating dawg
Chrizno...dun space ya bars...try to even out ya line to improve ya flow....you came a bit played...had a decenmt punch ot 2.....cut the net gangsta line like "flip my pistol grip make your brains splatter" Its weak
Vote Chrizno...for better punches
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^^^ agree here. this battle was pretty weak... ugly lines, lacklustre punches... disconnected flows.
anyway... Chrizno had better punches..or more of them.
I don't even know what Mortal was doing with the 'crack' theme. Reading that verse was as painful as watching a retarded kid write his obituary. jeez. no offense, I say this cause I'm sure you can do better.
Chrizno... you got it near the end. It took a while to get into it but the last couple punches were definately decent... and you got the vote.
vote - Chrizno
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These battle was very weak...
mortal- I don't even know what u were rapping about in some spots.. it wasn't very direct at all.. I didn't know u were battling Chriz cause u said nothing personal of him.. but neither did he to you.. so no biggie, but u should try to do that.. ur punches came weak, needs to be reworded.. and also need original punches, ehh.. I guess ur only bright spot would be flow, and thats even off.. work at it some more. keep up.
Chriz- again.. maybe try to work some personals^ like I said above.. you had two decent punches at the end of ur verse.. but up until that point u were losing this because u ave way too much self-glorification which doens't win you battles around here.. need to throw more punches.. word them nice and direct.. be witty and creative.. but you got this one.
vote- chriz
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i wasnt feeling mortal at all he came with fake personals and rubbish punches plus his flow wasnt there and his opener was crap and so was his closer
chriz had a nice closer and an ok opener his structure flow and punches were better than mortals and he was a bit more witty so my vote goes to criz
vs touch to gold
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117127
vs impendance
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116219
