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dope battle.
timeless- came really nice. its obviously not a pre-write cuz you made use of the post above yours. thats sumthin i haven't seen be done before. unique, thats a big plus. your flow was nice as well as your structure. nice job on that aspect. you filled your verse with sum nice personals. nice verse.
mentality- you too came pretty hard in this. at first your punches weren't too direct. but then towards the end you had sum good personals. your flow seemed a little stretched, but it still came out as nice.
this is a close one.
vote- timeless...i was feelin' timeless verse a little more. just cuz he came direct wit almost every line and his style in this was sumwut unique.
hit this up in return plz: 'me vs silent mumbles'
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=119515
thanx.
peace
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lol. im retarded. i mistook timeless for lyric^ my apologies.
vote- lyric...^for that reason.
peace
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yo fammos i came to a decision after reading these a couple or more times
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mentality took this he had stronger punches and his verse was pretty good
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i felt he connected more person wise too and had a unique approach
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lyric on the other hand had a nice drop to but came a lil soft n some areas
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overall i would say that mentality had a score ratio of 8/10 or higher
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as for lyric had just about the same score but a lil lower in score ratio
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aight mentality wins for coming out harder and steping up to the plate
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nice battle though both of you guys it was really close but ya kno
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hit my battle up mentality you kno which one aight man peaceout
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vote/mentality
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lyric
Damn D3linqu3nt, on my dick already, but I dun mind ya freepostin
Cause his shit had better punches...
...than what Mentality is fuckin throwin!
Kid tried out for my crew a couple days ago, but was quickly rejected by me
After seeing his whack verses...
...I referred him to Dynasty Soldiers naturally!
Keeps gettin rejected by weak crews, They read his lyrics and say the same
Dawg how can we possibly let you in?
...I mean man, you lost to MC Aines!
Bitch was supposed to drop way earlier, but chose flight rather than fight
Shoulda gave him a week heads up...
...So he'd have enough time to prewrite!
I mean why bother to drop now, you seen my verse and you can't win
Cause like the 7 horsemen
...You beaten me is the first sign of Armegeddon!
most of this was weak.. ya last bar was the only coo one..
Mentality
I'm blastin through your tough skin and its clear that you just dont see
That you could put my name in a marquee.........
...................................and still not have a chance to move me!
I kick whack kids like you all day just to practice breakin spines
I’m stuffin rulers down your throat.......
................................ so you can try and drop straight lines!
Your skill has nuttin to spare and i’m about to hit a strike
Cuz I could hand you a jordan poster...........
.......................................but you still couldn’t rip a mic!
After seeing your lyrics, i dont kno what to do with you
Cuz IJL's gonna drop Lyric from Arson Ill....
...........................................as well as the rest of the crew!
How'd you ever get in anyways...like popcorn your shit is corny
You should of no showed this battle......
.............................And concentraded on Judge in The 1-2 Tourney
whats wit all this?? '................' ??? i dont feel theres a need for all that.. in both a verses.. but this was nice.. had better puches.. and more well rounded..
Mentals spit was a lot better.. he just came wit better punches and was all around nice... I feel you both need to change your style.. cuz its a pain in the ass to read.. lol keep it up.. ghost..
vote=Mentaity
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overr all i thought i was a dope battle both of ya gave it ya best shot
but i really thought ment came out victorious
lyric:...I referred him to Dynasty Soldiers naturally!
Keeps gettin rejected by weak crews, They read his lyrics and say the same
Dawg how can we possibly let you in?
iiight thought it could have been better
ment:After seeing your lyrics, i dont kno what to do with you
Cuz IJL's gonna drop Lyric from Arson Ill....
...........................................as well as the rest of the crew!
How'd you ever get in anyways...like popcorn your shit is corny
You should of no showed this battle......
HOT SHYT SON ...MAD DOPE
breakdown:
opener:ment, need alittle work
flow:lyirc
mutlies:ment
punchlines:ment
enjoy reading:ment
closer:ment, it was okay nutin big
v/ mentality
I'll drop my poll vote after ment vote's on this battle honestlty thank u
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=119593
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aight uppin 2 for the win.....good battle lyric
get at me on aim
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Jeeezus no one gets my personal....blah uppppin
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good battle, i liked both of those verses but someones gotta lose
lyric nice battle vs the judge but this 1 you wont win
I kick whack kids like you all day just to practice breakin spines
I’m stuffin rulers down your throat.......
................................ so you can try and drop straight lines!
haha c u lost to this.
who wouldnt have
v/mentality
Unvalid vote.
-Axe
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uppin 3.....vote and drop a link please. .
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uppin 4....cmon and vote...please....drop links
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This was a really close battle...
Lyric:
^Damn D3linqu3nt, on my dick already, but I dun mind ya freepostin
Cause his shit had better punches...
...than what Mentality is fuckin throwin!
Meh...pretty played.
Kid tried out for my crew a couple days ago, but was quickly rejected by me
After seeing his whack verses...
...I referred him to Dynasty Soldiers naturally!
Pretty nice...but stretched.
Keeps gettin rejected by weak crews, They read his lyrics and say the same
Dawg how can we possibly let you in?
...I mean man, you lost to MC Aines!
Decent...
Bitch was supposed to drop way earlier, but chose flight rather than fight
Shoulda gave him a week heads up...
...So he'd have enough time to prewrite!
Decent..
I mean why bother to drop now, you seen my verse and you can't win
Cause like the 7 horsemen
...You beaten me is the first sign of Armegeddon!
Nice closer..
Mentality:
I'm blastin through your tough skin and its clear that you just dont see
That you could put my name in a marquee.........
...................................and still not have a chance to move me!
Ok..nothing special really..
I kick whack kids like you all day just to practice breakin spines
I’m stuffin rulers down your throat.......
................................ so you can try and drop straight lines!
lol
Your skill has nuttin to spare and i’m about to hit a strike
Cuz I could hand you a jordan poster...........
.......................................but you still couldn’t rip a mic!
lol
After seeing your lyrics, i dont kno what to do with you
Cuz IJL's gonna drop Lyric from Arson Ill....
...........................................as well as the rest of the crew!
ok
How'd you ever get in anyways...like popcorn your shit is corny
You should of no showed this battle......
.............................And concentraded on Judge in The 1-2 Tourney
ok closer..except he beat Judge so that killed it :(
So my final vote goes to Mentality. Lyric should have beaten him, but he didn't. Mentality's verse just had harder punches....
v/Mentality
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Because Mentality was banned for being a biter, all of his wins are being reversed. As the admins told me I could do this, it is being done on EVERY battle of his.
