JONESY_UK vs YO YO YO

OK thats a straight KO, i merked you, thanx for battle....................

well this was an average battle ok verse from both....jonsey had alot harder punches than YO and a nicer flow and structure....and metas too..YO you need to work on harder and more creative wordplay and punches both of you could of threw in a few more personals too....my vote goes to jonsey.....keep at it...

uppin x3...............ill vote on urs if u vote on this..........................dont sleep on it

Here is how I saw the battle

JONESY UK: You came thru nice, I liked your punches and personals, you had an ok structure, your wordplay was a little off but still pretty gud, I liked the variation in your lines aswell, overall 15/20

YO YO YO: Your punches just didn't came thru so hard as JONESY did, hardly saw any personals, you need to work on that, your structure was so-so, you voc was aight, like to see more creativity, originality, variation in your rhymes, overall 12/20
I have to give this to JONESY UK (I'll poll this when I hit 100+ posts) meanwhile take a look at my battles in my sig and vote plz...thx

ok uppin 4x............can i get more votes plz ....ill vote on urs if you drop a link

please vote on this..............uppin x5....dont sleep on it, i will vote on urs if u leave a link



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Ok....

YO YO YO......How long have you been writtin for...??

Go to RB help and have a good read...

Jonesy..

I didnt expect u to come this hard...

Ur piece was more un-complex dissin...But still very effective...

Vote/My man Jonesy

overal pretty weak battle
verse from uk:YO YO YO check dis newbie, ill spit a greenie on this joke
I read yours posts they say 106 and you still aint got 1 vote.
You not a rapper cos Mc’s aint d/r’s and they aint haters
So Take this application form fill it in, return to KFC cos they need some waiters.
You getting votes against you like bin laden would, if he ran for US president
You wouldn’t get respect if you gave a million dollars to every US resident.

Verses you drop are so clean and holy, a vicar could use um in a church ceremony.
In fact become a priest, a sad lonely cunt, and live your life obeying the ten commandment’s
Your loses make you ‘’WEEK’, cos I see your battle record is wins 0 loses 7.
No worries, cos once I kill you in this battle GOD knows you’re a bible basher, he has a place for you in heaven
^^blah needs improvement overall ratin
7/10

verse of yo yo yo:
Jonesy...u probally a fatty...dats still doesnt mean u spit heavy!
U dont spit yo.....u just love to swallow!

Jonesy u cant beat me in ur dreamland..heavy boy go join a rock band!
U dont spit u drool...just like u do afta missin da ice cream man!

I heard betta mutha fucka.....u words dont cum rite cuz u always chewin on a letter
Bad all the way to the bone...i have the throne..u just gettin thrown out my zone

Your lyrics should be " i ate all the pies the pizzas and the fries"
Open your eyes and realise that im the future franchise

It aint no mystery....dat u now history....im gettin the votes in dis rap city
U behave..u were brave...diggin ur own grave...bye bye arent u gonna wave!
^^ wack needs alot of improvemt
overall ratig :6/10

breakdown:
flow:uk
multies :uk
punhclines:uk
strcture:uk
opener: none
closer:closer


overall vote goes to joney uk
thought he merked yo yo yo
yoy oy need to really eleavte son ..ight lata ...

not bad yall did pretty good but the battle was kinda weak yo yo most of your lines didnt rhyme so thats why im giving it to jonesy_uk


V=jonsey_uk

yo can u guys poll the votes plz...............................................

Jones...Not a bad verse & some gud
punches & connxions. Some attempted
personals & a not bad flow

Yo....Kinda weak & no punches of significance.
Flow was not great & ur vocab is limited.

Jonesy wins

man can u not poll the vote?...........ive had like 8 votes and still only 4 polls

YO YO YO - your verse was weak man.. The structure was right wacked, which made the flow right wacked.. You had no real hard hittin punches, just weak jabs here and there.. No direct punches.. Weak verse, elevate. Check out the gauntlet battles to see whats what.

JONESY - Your verse was weak too, but not nearly as weak as yo yo's.. You had some more direct punches.. They weren't really hard hittin, but they hit harder then yo yo's did.. Your structure was easier to follow as wel..

My vote goes to jonesy due to harder hittin punches, and just a better written verse all round, with flow, structure, everything, all though not by much..

v/ JONESY UK