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iaght imma say that nino had long bars but came creative
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had decent enough attempt that ill say punches was good
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and person wise was hitting ok aswell so he took personals
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killa had played concepts and didnt land at all
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his ryme words were whack and to basic but her structure was good
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yo imma say nino had 7/10 and shit ya heard
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yo imma say killa had like 6/10 and shit ya heard me?
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vote/nino for overall consistancy
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aight man both you guys elavate and dont give up
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hit my battles when ya have some time and shit
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this wasa battle of 2 different styles and I like fast paced stuff and thats wut killa came with so ill drop a vote later...good battle though
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Nino- Longer doesn't mean better. Your shit was stretched and half of your punches were rediculously shitty. The whole thing was basically filler, and it didn't flow. When you came with it you came nice but even the creative stuff didn't flow. I wasn't feelin it.
Killa- I liked this line cuz the rhymes before it were weak and this line drew my attention:
I''ll plaster this bastard/shootin' so far cuz the aim is terrific/
have the helicopters and coastguards searchin' the pacific/"
You had good flow, your shit was easy to follow and you painted some pictures. Your shit is generalized though, and that doesn't make your lines personal. Work on punches and personals. Vote killer
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uppin final uppin on this .......................will return the favor...
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aight i thought that nino had the better verse because his was more complex and easier to read. the punches were good and so were the personals...use more of them in ur verse though...u had a good verse with some good concepts...try to fit some multies in there
killa had an ok verse but it lacked something...it was too simple and thge punches did not hit hard at all in my opinion.....work on some things..i see that ur gettin better
keep at it and keep gettin better
good work to the both of you.......v/nino
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cuz i'll beat u on tha street and i'll murder u on the stage/
and i'll punch ya head into ya back and lock u into ya ribcage/
it's get's even sadder/cuz ya flow is equivelant to disinergrated matter/
i'll leave u clapped,slapped,capped,smacked,fractured and tattered/
^^^^^^^ thats the best from ur verse, and ur verse sucked.... punches were horrible, decent flow, multies formed into nothingness..... ughhh hurt to read ur verse
and lethals verse was good.... not great, but it was very entertaining
so vote=lethal
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Aight...
this was very close.. and it took me awhile to think this all through.. lethal don't ever make ur words that small again plz.. I'll normal vote against u for that.. cause ur doubling what the other person can use, its kinda cheating.. but that aside.. killa came really weak and overall punchwise I think lethel came much stronger with his.. killa had better wordplay.. and damn just so damn close here, but I'm going to say lethel here.. killa I've seen a better verse for you before. if u did that same one u would have had this..
vote- leth
