^^^^What tha hell is that?
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^^^^What tha hell is that?
Lol..
Smilie face..
=)
Haha..
Pz..
This was very nice...
The flow, vocab and creativity were spot on. But I think you coulda fixed the structure.
But other than that this was really good. Very original...
Good work
Dope piece u wrote up here.. I really liked it alot
I dont really know whats a common topic and whats not, cause I haven't really gotten into the OM's till now.. but this was tight
Kept up a good story all through it, it all connected together.. I liked the second part (last part) of it the most..
very nice overall...
If get a chance check out my Open Mic "On this day"
Nice piece
Very interesting
Showed emotion
Props man..
Keep it up
but i love my sig. lol.............
'stop dissin it people'
i already hit this. so i guess i'll hit that other thing in ur sig. i'll
do it tomorrow tho. im tired.
peACE
This was very good Freeman. The flow was real smooth and the multis and vocab were great. Didn't get much imagry from it, but The emotion was definitly there. I liked the sudden twist in the middle, made for an interestin read. Good job
peep Mu collab with Formula in my sig please
Up we go..
I really like this piece.. Lol..
this was really good and i saw that you used it from your battle against wogzta if i had 1 more win id be able to vote in elevated front lines and id vote for yours so basically it was really good man keep shit like this comein it neva gets old or borins.