Kuruption_vs-Yo Yo Yo

This was an ok battle Kuruption you need to work on ur verse structure and also your wordplay and punches and same goes goes to Yo Yo

Punches=tie
Personal= Kurupt
Mutis= None
Meta4s = tie
opener = K
Closer = tie
Overall = goes to Kuruption

ppl who read dis battle plz vote..................

kruption mad structure, need to add multies , u should have added alittle bit of punchlines ,good flow overall, just need yo work on writin cuz i that messed u up

yo yo yo
plain wack overrall u need to add multies , add puchlines, and u need to make personal's look at people profiles and diss them off that

kruption:

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I'm comin at ya cuz put on ya 3-D glasses//I cant be held responsible for tha crowds reactions//I dont know ya cuz never heard of ya cuz and after this shyt you'll be showin luv//but like Johnny 5 I disassemble and destroy wannabe playboys//

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NEED TO WORK ON IT BUT OKAY OVERALL

yo yo yo :

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should have combined to spit blind to compete wid ur mind
i rap 1st i dont hit another guy from behind!
Bitch should switch..and get the hell out of dis pitch!
U couldnt spit hard if rocks came out of ur ass
Smash u like glass.....only reason u belong on MTV is coz u belong on Jackass!

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DID I JUST HEAR A CORNY JOKE

breakdown:
flow:krup
mutlies:no one
punchlines: on one
opener: krup , it was weak
closer:krup, also weak thought could have been better
overrall vote goes to kruption
please return the favor and ill drop my poll vote

come on out and vote yall we aint lookin 4 prez or tryna see who got tha best legs its easy just vote

its crazy tryna get votes mayne.......seriously......

UH lets see now vote man............................................... ........

Get Sum Votes Goin.................................

Aight fucc this I dont give a fucc who wins I need to be freed up so I can get at more niccaz.....................

This is like beatin a fucc'n dead horse cancel this shyt...........

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Damn mufuccaz still aint vote on this bytch yet.........