Cool piece ath, i responded to it elsewhere - not sure where, but it was pretty nice, rounded it off dope at the end. Well written.
Lol at the RB kids happy i brought you here now :^)
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Cool piece ath, i responded to it elsewhere - not sure where, but it was pretty nice, rounded it off dope at the end. Well written.
Lol at the RB kids happy i brought you here now :^)
This was dope man, serious. Every aspect of this was not flawed at all. Imagery was incredible. The lines Freeman quoted at the end of his reply were amazing. This piece blew me away, as I've never read anything from you before. There was an underlying truth to it, which made it even iller. You have seriously dope story writing skills and you have my attention for all your pieces from now on, so keep dropping, please. And keep this level of dopeness up in all pieces to come, Pz.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=119422
^ ^ Return the favor , Thanks.
Yo man, jus wanted to let u know from a new cats perspective this is what alot of us kids out here come online to read. Your story was dope, and like alot of the cats above and before me noted, the realler the story is the iller the feeling gets. And it flow pretty f**ken real man.. nice drop. particulary loved the lines quoted by Freeman.
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