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Slayer you are pretty good about voting on other people's shit so I am savin you an up and givin some comments even though I can't vote.
This was definitely not your best piece. I actually think Matt g's shit came harder in the beginning and he had more meta's. BUT you had personals and he didn't so even though this one was completely average, my hypothetical vote goes to you. Matt G you had some pretty decent metas, both need to come more complex and creative. Hit up the links in my sig
I got 100 posts now so i'm hittin up old posts with votes. Vote Slayer explanation above.........Hit up my battle with Thing in my siggy
ok this was an weak battle
slayer u have an ok verse but u need to work on ur structure and ur personas was a little weak will the delivery was bad you need to bring it harder but anyways i say u need to work on that throw miore mutis and meta4s and wordplay in there it makes the verse better
Matt U need to elevate on ur skills and ur structure what was that damn shit was ugly and the flow was not bad but um work on ur punches and ur personals not much in there and ur punches was a lil played and leave the fillers alone u need more hard hitting punches and personals
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