The Inner Meaning (AKA ELEETE)

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Originally Posted by Antonio Banderas

Nice verse... Good length of your verse & Nice composition.... The ryhming technique you used worked well (Mini- multies at the end of each verse) ... Also the flow was well maintained in the entire verse...

Good Job... 8.2/10

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Agree totally..gud sum up by Ant..
Wasn't too long, not too short,
Had nice bits of creativity thrown
in here..all in all a great piece..check
new piece above this..pz

This shit is dope, i slept on your previous work i'll be reading most of em from now on, the line about Ambient lights was dope as hell.Nice flow and imegery

(Adds name to list of people he'll be reading from now on)

nice
the rhyming was a bit basic you could of been more experimental (try to have more complex rap scheme)
it sounded a bit like you were just trying to fit the rhymes together but still a good verse

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Originally Posted by idle

nice
the rhyming was a bit basic you could of been more experimental (try to have more complex rap scheme)
it sounded a bit like you were just trying to fit the rhymes together but still a good verse

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Oh god....^^^ Can anyone believe that???