Love for a Brother

this was pretty dope.. flow was pretty good, nice use of multie's and the emotion was dope aswell.... vocab usage was also nice and the wording was dope.... not much else i can say that hasnt allready been said... good shit man

thanx man. i appreciate it. can i get more on this plz.
thanx.

This was a very nice write. I havent read your pieces befor I dont think. This is going to make me read your future ones. The rhyme scheme was made just right, the vocab was as well. You told a great story with great emotion. I liked this piece alot, maybe add some more excitement and it would have been even better. Nice write hommie, keep it up...

( please return the favor and peep " Lonely Path " ... Its in Open Mic right now... )

^thanx man. i appreciate it. i'll hit that up for sure.

peace

Wow man, wasn't expecting this. This was on another level. Just from the text I could feel the pain and emotions...nice flow, excellent vocab(almost as good as mine, hehe), some good multies later on and the best part of this was the last bar...10/10

very ill flow... you kept it real tight and on point... though it did seem a bit... ermmm... matter of fact? I think that's how i would describe it....

oh well... check out my collab with SMZ on the media...

^thanx peepz. i appreciate it..............
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peace

Ey man, you really got this story telling shit down pat, and ya flows really blew me away.. They were fluid, and really showed your dexterity, and how deep u felt about the things you were trying to illustrate. You killd it man.
great job dawg

^thanx man. i really appreciate it.
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peace

That was a tight as hell open mic man
I really liked everything about it.. and you really did tell a story with it
Created pictures in my mind..
I love the vocabulary used and rhyme scheme in it

Very nice...

If u get a chance check out "On this day" in OM

~"They say sometimes people are too young to love when in actuality
Children are the only ones who hold a true sense of love’s fallacy"~

damn i like that. its so true. ur gifted. much love~

^thanx a lot. i appreciate it. means a lot.

peace

Surprising..

Lose your cartoon sig though..

Nice piece..

Not gona go into detail..

Just say that im pleasantly surprised..

Well done.. :)..

Hit something in my sig..

Thanks..

Pz..