Ace vs Temporis

dammit kids. start voting. lol. am i the only one who votes on this damn site.
most of the time i vote on someones battle, and tell them to come here they don't.
so vote on this and I WILL vote on a battle of yours. thanx

peace

Yup Ace wons this for a verse with harder punches

Temporis...you only came with 8 lines and there is a 10 line minimum....Also don't space your bars...and try and be more creative and original with your verse...stay away from simplistic lines...come with more personals and harder punches...not a terrible verse...keep elevating

Ace....Ok verse...kindfa weak but enough to win this battle...get rid of the spaces...you came with some pretty good personals....but you could dtill be a bit more creative wit ya metas...overall a decent verse

PLease drop an opinion here guys... thanks http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=118886

MY VERDICT

Temp: boring verse man no personels or multies or punches basically all u had was ya flow. u need to make some punches and personels next time.2/10 very weak but still try to improve dont take my critism to harshly as ur new to rb so u need to improve.

Ace: ok drop u had a few good personals and attacks here and there and overall a good drop nice flow and it wasnt boring. quite enjoyable to read and all u neede was a bit more complexities and this would of been a complete merkin but u did good 8/10.

Punches: ace
structure:temp
flow:temp
attacks: ace
personals:ace
vocab:ace
overall:ace

MY VOTE : Ace of Aces