Damn...I replied to over 20 joints. Can I please get some feedback?...
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Damn...I replied to over 20 joints. Can I please get some feedback?...
Quit sleeping...
And why don't people return the favor?
Free up.. From me to you.. For being so slept on..
^Thanks, homie.
Guess I'll kick this in the ass
returing the favor.
Ok to the piece, this was a dope.
Great imagery,multi's,structure, concept.
all in all this piece was exquisite(as said above :P)
it was really dope. and I look forward to seeing more of your works:
Feedback please ;):
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?p=1262941
chea, wasn't ur best piece but dam straight it was ill.
I probably am way off on the message i got lol...but the one I did get was pretty cool.
Kinda of like...sometimes our conscience is so influenced by hate, that it often confuses what is right...and what is wrong.
"Slightly drizzling, the clouds part and reveal intense, orange, Sun rays-
On this glum day, as if saying, ‘ the concrete’s worthy of the sun’s praise’...
I Inhale, and the blunts haze circle my once dazed mind, as I hit the lye
And I notice a collected puddle reflecting the hues of a conflicted sky"
^perfect lead-up for this piece. Leaves the reader puzzled the first time you hear it...but when you finish the piece, you see the foreshadowing.
Don't worry about OM of the month...shit is a popularity contest. You know it was dope...and we all do too. Keep up the good work arch.