^Wow...Thanks...but...Evidently,You have never read any of my other stuff...LOLQuote:
Originally Posted by $carface
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^Wow...Thanks...but...Evidently,You have never read any of my other stuff...LOLQuote:
Originally Posted by $carface
ill reply later, jus seen t he topic,,, i did it earlier, but a film jus started so.... i'll get to it in a bit
this was good.. real good penskills.. you are a lot of good.. lol well really i was feeling this.. the 3rd verse was hella tight tho.. the other ones were good but the 3rd just was killer... the flow was off but ehh its only cause the lines are long.. like mine...
hit up my first last day.. in my sig
Pretty much agree with all thats been said.....nice structure...I thought the flow was fine...vocab was tight...multis were good...ok they were excellant..imagry was good...And I like the concept....
Hit up Open Mic in sig please
That's What I Like To Read, Some Shit With Substance. You Got Better As The Verses Went On. Good Shit
^Now,That's a Reply! :thumbup:Quote:
Originally Posted by RHYME_ZILLA
Pennny get on aim, .. dope sig man .. =) ..
Uppin this for my holmes.
What's Love~~~~Got to do~~~Got to do with it~~~~
Damn this shits wack as fuck.
^Where is the Love~~~Where is the Love!!!Quote:
Originally Posted by Diony Sus
If u is as hot, as u say ur nurses are, ill show u how big my love is =)
^Hot like Fire~~My Desire~~~~HOtt~~~~Hot~like Hottie~hott~~Quote:
Originally Posted by Diony Sus
Word, lets continue on aim w/ our cyber session ..
Upppppppppppppppppper
:thumbup: Bravo Penny, Bravo! :thumbup:
A very very dope piece.........all of this stuff is something i can really an most people can really relate to....
Gone to wreckage..what genie do you know fills out a form for a deathwish
Unable to mesh shi* ...<--That line was like :shocked:
I've felt it...the reprecussions..the pain...dreaming of being blessed with concussions
A coma at best...fully loading the three eight and playing roulette without Russians.. :shocked:
I thought your imagery was amazing......you really know how to implement the pictures in peoples heads...you do a great job at that.....dope pen.......
Everything else in it just came together so perfectly...excellent!! if not legends at least OM of the Month :thumbup:
Wa the fuck, this isnt wack i disagree, i thought that was tight keep it up.Quote:
Originally Posted by Diony Sus