Vote.. Lyrically
Hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116816
Printable View
Vote.. Lyrically
Hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116816
Dinox.. up again and you are DQed.
You are allowed 5 ups.. every post after both verses are considered ups and you're at six.
uppppppppppppppiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn (3).........
upppiiinnnnnnn.......plze leave ya links...........i will hit it up.......sleeeepppinnnnnn on this!!!!!!
last up....and i will return da favor.....promise.....
Lemme give u advice, you better 'prey'(pray) before i 'catch you'
Now take a look at ya sig..im da one in da back...den guess whoz u?
Lol good opener and personal
Call him the terminator, the way im "herbing" this new ass emcee....
N call me Bryane Pat n' Joe, da way im killin em from "sea 2 shining sea"
ok line
Watch as I cut through this dinox bitch...as if it were a sonic boom
Dis bitch cant hear me coming....like a Mazda car (whipser) "zoom zoom"
Lol another good personl line toward his sig
Like fruit in a grocery...this bitch has just been but on bargain-hez fresh
But he didn't noe dat pple wud "eat" em...n dat mc's wuld rip out hiz flesh
kind of played but still a good line
I killed this bytch wit mah opener..1st 2 lines...now letz c a framing device
This bitche's chances of beating me are zero pecent,like rollin a 7 on a dice
lol good closer
dinox's verse
i'ma 'lyrically-abuse-you', send my spit right through-you,
then i'ma 'act wack' cuz i've beat you already just like 'you-do'!
Ok openr good , ok referance toward his name
you're battlin dinox dog i think its best-you-quit,
you'd still be 'uncool'(uncle) if you had a 'nephew-bitch'!
Didnt really get this line are all...
'squash this turd' leave him wit 'pressed-shit', don't test-this,
i 'expose these pussies' like 'undressed clits'!
not that great of a line but ok.
i drop this fresh and i got this kid dribblin-mold,
this 'cats starvin' like 'felines' starin at 'kibbles-in-bowls',
ok line....
glare-at-nines, resign and still have extra sparin-time,
impare-ya-lines, kill ya cuz ya 'ever-green' like i'm 'tearin pines'!,
Bad closer
Ok
this was a 1 sided battle. Dinox didnt really have anything that caught my eye. could of had a better verse i think. Lyrical had good personals almost his whole verse made me laugh lol Dinox needlevate on his punchs and personals
vote- Lyricallabbusiv
Quote:
Originally Posted by lyicallyabbusiv
Dinox had mostly wordplay, and wack punchesQuote:
Originally Posted by Dinox
he had maybe 1 good bar, but eh... Elevate
lyricallyabbusiv didn't come that great neither
he was a little more complex with punches & personals
Not by much though... he gets my vote.. But Elevate
V/Lyricallyabbusiv
well ima have to go with lyricallyabusive on this one.....Dinox...you came a little too basic, I did get your wordplay but that wasnt enough...you have to come with more creative punches and harder hitting personals..your opener could have been worded better....a couple of played lines and a kinda weak closer, you need to come a little harder next time.....keep at it
Lyrically:you had a couple of stretched lines but if flowed alright...some good punches and metas....you came a little more original but you could work on wording as well..structure was ok and you had a nice closer...I thought it was just more of a complete verse, though you coulda thrown in some more personals and herder punches....good job...
V-LyricallyAbusive...
return the favor...
check my sig...