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Fuck Man........U really do wish a happy long life towards ur family..!!

Its not that at all, i just feel if i take someone i know in real life .. its easier to describe them and put them into the situations sub-conciously, i can get a mental image of it better than i can with a character ive made up off the top of my head. It helps with the imagery i guess, its not based on any factual happening.

My bad .. lol ..

I responded to Maven's piece ..

Very nice Baron..

Flowed well.. One place where you needed an extra syllable or something jus to even it out.. But that is it..

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Originally Posted by pot1ent

.. I saw it as punishment; & though home's where the heart is ..
.. I reached a point i felt as if i lacked a heart to start with ..

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Best bar in the whole thing.. Nice wordplay..

The story was very good how it unfolded.. You could of gone down three routes for this from the way you started.. You chose the best one.. Well done..

Good drop..

Hit up my latest please.. Its called..

"For Fear Of Nothing Better".. Link is in my sig..

Thank you..

Pz..