ok i cant vote but judge killed this newb!!! :-) pz!!
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ok i cant vote but judge killed this newb!!! :-) pz!!
ok judge got this for a better ryhme scheme and punches that werent his best ....but it didnt need to be good to win this one
judge had the good personals and the good punches
he had the good flow and the strcuture wasnt bad
the other guy came way to simple and he didnt have a personal in his verse
on the oither hand judge came ok with personals
for a bertter verse and a reasonable amount of good punches
v/judge
hit up the battles in my sig please!
flood- you came ok for a newcomer. lol. you really need to work on those punches. they didn't really connect at all. but hey, at least you rhymed, the flow was ok and so was the structure. you need to try to up ur vocab tho becuz you sounded pretty basic. you had sum personals which is good. overall 6/10
the judge- you had sum nice punches in there. especially the ones with personals in them. you had a much better style. i culd actually tell you're experienced in battling. your flow was nice and so was ur structure. the only problem i had with your verse was your spelling. lol. nice job tho. 8/10
vote- judge...better hits, structure, flow, and more personals.(style)
plz hit this battle up in return:
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117419
thanx.
pz