L0st S0ul Vs. Ace of Aces

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pz

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damn. lol. can i get some for votes on this plz. and plz explain them good enuff.
thanx.

pz

This was a good battle..

Lost Soul: Your verse was pretty good...Just your structure was stretched out, didnt like that very much...kinda threw the flow off at some points....you had some alright punches...the opener wasnt that good...I kinda liked the closer to your verse though, kinda funny.

Ace of Aces: You had a good verse as well, made a nice battle....you had better structure...had some good punches in there...The opener was alright, probably played out a bit but still decent...closer was nice, better than Lost Souls, I liked it...You had some nice personals in there as well.

Overall: a nice battle but Ace of Aces took this one...Took it because he had better punches overall...just hit harder I thought and connected with his better. Props to both though...vote goes to Ace of Aces.

lol...pretty much 1 sided battle.... ace takes this without a doubt

more punches personals wordplay ..the whole 9, lost you need some elevation before battling vets like ace

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MY VERDICT

flow: ace
punches: tie
wordplay: lost
personals: ace
metas: lost
structure: tie

Lost: good shit but could of been better u had a few good personals bout aces and winnin and shit like that but nothin else.good worplay and good metaphors. u should work on ur flow but u did good ryhmes thouigh but it was a little stuttery here and there but overall good. 6/10
my favourite line:
"This ace of spades and showin no stealth..if so..then why's his crew himself kid.."


Ace: even better shit man really good flow and you had great personals and an ok structure your only let down was not any metas but ur punches were good and that won you the match. but overall you battled better than lost 8/10
my favourite line :
"By creating ya name, you already predicted the result of this attack
Cuz its obvious that a "lost" is wut you have and a win is wut u lack"

overall this was a good battle both of you had good stuff keep up the writeing.

MY VOTE: Ace of Aces

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Alright.. I'll finish this battle up for you..

This was.. sort of close. I really liked a few of the metas and wordplay that lost had in his verse. They were good ideas. Maybe could've been worded a lil differently but good in the least. I think ace had harder punches and personals, as well as better flow and it all kinda came together for me. I felt his verse alot more. Both of them were original, which is good. Played shit doesn't work for me. I just think ace's verse had more to it, it was better, and it hit alot harder then lost did to yours. no hate here obviously though.... i know lost is better then that

vote- ace