I know im fuckin weak right now
But rappad u know as well as I do that i'll start back up again, just a matter of days dude............
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I know im fuckin weak right now
But rappad u know as well as I do that i'll start back up again, just a matter of days dude............
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come on vote on this thread so i can battle............................................ .....................
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this is so slepped........................................... .............................................
^^your stupid...
please dont post that both verses were weak. That just brings beef up and makes you look stupid. Give positive feedback instead of insults or dont vote idiot.
keep it inform,what ever you are you wont it make far
your gonna get wimped like a leashed retart in a dog park
i think you have a few spellin mistakes?? i dont understand it
i dont understand you name even your game is a confusin
][\/][.o.lb the fuck is that,what are you stupid
blah, weak filler
what ever you doing,your runnin my patince
i can tell your fan of the matrix,so face it
da fukk
your in the real world and your a real girl
hmmm
ready to get hurled to the surface
trust me,everybody know that your mind aint perfect
filler
so listen to me just go to church kid
ehh
since your life is uncertain and curvin while the earth is turnin
til your whole soul start burnin and learnin that your a weak person.
EhH :|
Y'd u except? u've lost ur mind like Inhalin too much Lead
You suck like Teeth being used and giving some bad Head
ehhh, not feelin
I give you absolutely no props like Mimes actin on Stage
I'll ruin u like novel books when turning to the Last Page
lol, second line let it down but i liked the first, coulda been harder punch though
This bitch squats to pee, Now Im about to Kill Her
Do u get many Cavities? Cuz all ur lines are Fillers
lol -- decent
So Lay off the sweets dude, your facin Tooth Decay
Stealin my inhalers the only way u could take my Breath Away
aight, pretty played
I aint a slut this wont go easy like ur first battle Did
Doc is in a crew? Terri fox wouldnt run with this Kid
blah!
Like Womens Facial Treatment this battle is a Wrap
This kid is almost nuthing, He's Hawai on a World Map
eh, not feelin, first line was aight
U just lost, thats what happens when do things ur bad In
I DAM this bitch this hell, like Beavers comittin Bad Sins
alright wordplay, not hard hitting though
Fillers- doc t -1
punches- thorn 1
metaphors- thorn 1
wordplay- thorn 1
multis- doc t 1
doc 0 -- thorn 3
Vote:- Thorn -- pretty much ripped this battle, both need to concentrate on harder punches.... wun~
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Punches were soft, didn't exactly leave an effect.Quote:
Originally Posted by Doc.t theSandGod
Structure was gone to hell, seriously needs to be even'd out.
Personals were pretty played, none were exactly personals.
Wordplay was attempted, but was not successful. Work on that.
Multies were not used period. They could help you, work at that also.
Overall.. Verse was pretty weak. 9/20
Punches were also soft. Could really use workQuote:
Originally Posted by Thorn
Personals were played. Also weren't even consider'd as personals.
Wordplay wasn't used. Neither was multies, you could use both.
Structure was better, which helped you alot on this battle.
V/Thorn
Pretty close battle, but Thorn gets this due to structure
All the other categories were pretty close, besides structure.
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Alot of the lines on each of ur verses were played. More so on doct's part. I didn't really read much that I haven't already heard, or something similar to. Doc.t u came pretty weak man. It all flowed alright, and sounded alright.. but u didn't really hit him with anything real. Thorn or MOB.. ur verse was full of metas, some were nice. But mainly atleast u threw some decent hitting punches, in which doc.t didn't do much. Better punches, metas win this battle for mob.
vote- mob
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