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Oh Eki... if you were asking me to drop a link... im too lazy to find it, but if you want, you can check these out:
wogzta & FormulaMC - The Origins Of The Two
or the Instant Collab...
both feature me in it (lol) so there ya go... or you could save the favour for one of my upcoming solo open mics, up to you...
thanks for offering tho!!
ps. what did you mean by 'another wog'... I thought i was the only one!! :P
nah man :) am here to ..From Melbourne .... I already gave feedback for both of those...
damn what a nice drop .. really feelin it .. id say 10/10 ..
^ cool Eki... PM me with ur msn or something... lol
Stoppin uppin your shit ever five minutes! you are preventing other good materials(some terrible) from being viewed from the top.
Anywho,This was okay :), it's nowhere near "Perfect" as these clowns make it to be..
Your concept was a bit played out,but you managed to handel it well.
Your flow and wordplay was nice,but the shit just dragged on,I can see this being a wonderful decent length size verse.
I'm happy to see you progress :)
Keep up the good work :thumbup:
If you think I 'm "Hating" with this comment..well... Lmao...
I'll kill you :evilgrin:
real deep stuff. good overall..... the only thing wrong was the flow. when i read it it sounded like u were preaching instead of rappin. any 7.5/10 good stuff
it alright
I agree totally with Dev...
I started reading it, and i was caught from the 1st two lines.....
You did not use too much vocab, but u didnt use little of it...
I did not see allot of internals and multies...But that was substituted by everything ells...
All in all...Is was a great piece...
uppin for wogzta for a beat :)
Thats some real nice shit man. Very insightful, had a consistant flow to it, and you stayed on topic very well.. What i liked most was youre use of division to concentrate on different aspects of the topic. You presented your images well, and created a sense of atmosphere in the piece by starting off with a mention of the bible. And THEN emphasising what you meant, by adding in information about past wars, tragedies etc. Quoting helped too, as it allowed youre verse(s) to be understood even more so with an accompanying context.. Very dope drop, and my only beef with the piece is that it did sound a little like an essay.. But a dope drop nonetheless .
"Centuries ago before time was remebered - a mysterious code existed
from the first world war to Sep 11th all the details were listed"
^^ You told the story well.. and btw, Im just wonderin if this is true. or u just came up with this bible code idea...
Good job, and if u get the time peep my OM piece
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=126573
Thanks